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A broken mother
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Sunday, January 28, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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" You see before you -
A brokem mother.
She has not
always been so.
Once she was
like you.
She was
an emblem
of democracy
and freedom.
But these days,
she is forced
to live under
the mortars
of death
and destruction.
Ah! Now,
she could not
tolerate the pain.
Poor she.
She's driving
out of her life
with an outline
of history in her eyes
- totally ignoring
the pungent odor
of patriotism
erupting from here core
along an old rhino trail
with the setting peace
behind her back."

Copyright 2007 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviewed by Rose Rideout 3/29/2007
I do feel the hurt and pain and thank you for your beautiful words.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 2/13/2007
Extremely well executed piece of writing, Bhuwan!
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 2/4/2007
When will they ever learn? You will teach them.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten 1/30/2007
Hopefully the compassions of the poets like you, can give her the boost she needs to heal!
Sad write, but as always, keep the faith and hope for a better future ahead!
Love and Peace~
Reviewed by Larry Matthews 1/29/2007
Very emotional and deep. Powerful message. Luke
Reviewed by Linda Hill 1/29/2007
Powerful write Bhuwan!


Reviewed by jude forese 1/28/2007
hopefully the broken mother will find solace again ... emotively powerful poem, Bhuwan ...
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury 1/28/2007
Sad but powerful.
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 1/28/2007

Reviewed by Tactfully Naive 1/28/2007
Sad that the larger world of political intrigue and amoral expediency gatecrashes our personal lives and destroys it. How do we marry the individual with community, society, and the world at large? Who can know?
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 1/28/2007
Clear and concisely penned, Bhuwan, it is a very sad and pitiful situation of which you etch upon the soul of the reader.
Take care,
Reviewed by Debra Kraft 1/28/2007
Well and wisely penned.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/28/2007
I truly hope your dear old mother can recover, Bhuwan.

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