When first I met my daddy & mommy...By RUFUZ
by Ed Matlack
Tuesday, February 13, 2007
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Understand, i got used to my daddy since I was a puppy...;) R
For a human daddy wasn’t much to look at,
He had this scraggly thing he called a beard,
But mommy was most beautiful, I popped one right there,
I did not want her to see, not till I got to know her, only fair…
They took me for a ride in this awesome Jeep,
Daddy loved it, but learned to love me more,
He complained of my hair being everywhere,
Boy was he upset when his seat belt I did tear…
They got me a haircut, RIGHT DOWN TO MY SKIN,
They said they wanted to make sure I was clean,
It was the coldest I ever felt, but my fur grew back with a sheen,
They gave me my own bed and a porch to play on,
We lived at the beach so we went for walks on the beach,
I don’t go too deep in the ocean anymore since that day I saw the fin…
I grew up like any other normal doggy,
Dad was not happy when I came from the ocean all soggy,
But once he dried me down he got over being groggy,
Most times he was just my human, even when he smoked,
That stuff for some reason made him seem, more than normal, foggy…J
© Rufuz J 2.13.2007
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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|You are one lucky doggie to be loved Rufuz!!
Love Aunty Tinky
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|I salute you Rufus for an exceptional write.
Light and Wisdom ...
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Alright Rufus...happy Valentine's Day to you and daddy both!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Four paws up, Rufie; you are a dear, and so's your daddy! Happy Valentines' Day to y'all!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Well done. :) You could have done worse..........too many dogs have. You are indeed fortunate. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|For a human daddy wasn’t much to look at
You know, Rufuz, I had that same thought as a kid about your Daddy - you and I must be Blood Brothers!
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Your love for this little guy is so sweet,he's very lucky to have a great mommy and daddy..Happy Valentines Day|
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|LOL, I just love your poetry about Rufuz! This is so charming and delightful to read -- thank you for my morning smiles!
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|No wonder it's"a dog's lufe". You have it made Rufuz. Happy Valentine's day.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|even Rufuz knew
did he ever find your stash?
A very Kool write Ed
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines
|Rufuz sure does write a neat poem! I love this kind of "Voice" work, where you get right into the mind of your subject. Remember "White Fang"? Good stuff, Ed!