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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/10/2006 |
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Excellent write Michael!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) |
6/27/2002 |
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| Great Write ..... |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
6/26/2002 |
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This is so true and real and I am so pleased you submitted this,society needs to care more for those old folk alone in homes
for the elderly ,I also have written about this subject a coulple of times myself ,it is so sad ,so very very sad.
Best wishes dear Michael. |
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| Reviewed by D. Enise |
6/26/2002 |
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This touched me to tears! So well written such powerful truth!! What we do today, is what we will be left with , what lives inside our hearts..Joy and light, or pain, one day.. alone..
I pray for those that find themselves living this type of end.
~Jen
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| Reviewed by Josephine Bohen |
6/22/2002 |
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i concur with mr judeace, it is within ourselves that we find youth, i plan to write until they throw the dirt in, and in my art lies my freedom. excellent write
josie |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/22/2002 |
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Excellent write!!!!! It's a real problem some must face, but as Robert has said here, keeping a creative and active mind and always feel young does help.
Great write, Michael!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$ |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
6/22/2002 |
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A fate too common, Michael. I don't have solutions; perhaps Robert the Ace is right.
May all of us retain that imaginative mind...
Gina |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/22/2002 |
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| so we must maintain our creavtivity to spill into ur soul and keep the body and mind always young... |
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| Reviewed by Gone Gone (Reader) |
6/21/2002 |
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| This was a very well written piece. I enjoyed it very much. |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
6/21/2002 |
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Hi Michael,
Such a sad heartfelt write...
When you have the time.
Read my poem...
"Yesterday's Memories".
It is basicaly on the
same subject...
Great write...
Trixie |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/21/2002 |
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| Wow Michael! Exceptional write! Lots of emotion and anquish. Wonderful! |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/21/2002 |
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| Nice write. I really like the second stanza. |
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