|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Excellent write Michael!!
|Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
|Great Write .....|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|This is so true and real and I am so pleased you submitted this,society needs to care more for those old folk alone in homes
for the elderly ,I also have written about this subject a coulple of times myself ,it is so sad ,so very very sad.
Best wishes dear Michael.
|Reviewed by D. Enise
|This touched me to tears! So well written such powerful truth!! What we do today, is what we will be left with , what lives inside our hearts..Joy and light, or pain, one day.. alone..
I pray for those that find themselves living this type of end.
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|i concur with mr judeace, it is within ourselves that we find youth, i plan to write until they throw the dirt in, and in my art lies my freedom. excellent write
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Excellent write!!!!! It's a real problem some must face, but as Robert has said here, keeping a creative and active mind and always feel young does help.
Great write, Michael!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|A fate too common, Michael. I don't have solutions; perhaps Robert the Ace is right.
May all of us retain that imaginative mind...
|Reviewed by jude forese
|so we must maintain our creavtivity to spill into ur soul and keep the body and mind always young...|
|Reviewed by Gone Gone (Reader)
|This was a very well written piece. I enjoyed it very much.|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Such a sad heartfelt write...
When you have the time.
Read my poem...
It is basicaly on the
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Wow Michael! Exceptional write! Lots of emotion and anquish. Wonderful!|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Nice write. I really like the second stanza.|