|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|"if only for a day" really can be a lot. very lovely write/read. good idea regarding the trilogy. thanks again|
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|This was beautiful La Belle, thanks for sharing, and stopping by. :)|
|Reviewed by J M
|Innocent and young love -puppy love is so precious you capture it to perfection endearing poetry.
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|First of all, I love the title of this poem
It remind me of my first love so innocent and pure
And tender so much beauty Wow!!
Your message very clearly conveyed
I love it
Keep up the very good work! Belle
Love And Peace To You always..Morning Star
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|... What is UP with me???!! This absolutely takes my breath away and touches me just so deeply... Think I must have a massive, unearthed power-point deep in my subconscious somewhere that makes a mighty connection with this, Belle. I adore it, especially:
She thought he was wild and impolite
but she loved to hear him laugh.
It made her feel a thrill of freedom.
And that gleaming ponytail thing is totally spot on... Bless you for this. It is for real. TY Kate xx
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|...ah, the bloom of young love...beautiful write, Belle
love and peace, Carole
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Awe, such a beautiful write my friend, enjoyed this much. A tender and heartwarming look at the innocense of youth! Great write!
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
Very beautiful in all the splendor of youth.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh this is wonderful poetry...thanks!!
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|precious moments...love how vividly i can see them through your words|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|tender, moving, capturing an endearing moment via superb imagery, La Belle ...|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Beautiful story within your words, LaBelle; very well done! BRAVA~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Looking forward to part the second~
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|You weave a captivating story, La Belle, in beautiful, hopeful form. I look forward to Part 2!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.