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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
3/30/2007 |
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And what a thrilling, trilling, scintillating descension this is!
Aberjhani |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
3/27/2007 |
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What a beautiful picture.
Nice and lovely write....
Lurve ya!
At school for a feww. Kids are
on Spring break...... |
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| Reviewed by Zahala San Simone |
3/26/2007 |
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What a lovely sentiment, contained in an equally lovely work.
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| Reviewed by Erin Woods |
3/25/2007 |
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So passionate...so divine...so well done Eileen ! ...
erin |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
3/25/2007 |
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| More beautiful than words can say, love holly |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
3/25/2007 |
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Very nicely done a vivid colorful portrait and very
Romantic full of passion and sensual desire
Excellent imagery and flow love the tone
Beautifully written
Absolutely enjoyed this poetic view of
Your thoughts my friend!
Love and Peace To You Always...Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/25/2007 |
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This is heavy indeed,,,but hey!!
Once
The playground of many
Fields and heaven
Gauze…
Melancholic view
Bevy of larks
Survey of high priority
Golden horizons now gone
Not translucent anymore
As a barge of obsidian
Sluggish volcano glass
Slowly covers up reed’
Once again
The power of nature
Has spoken
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
3/25/2007 |
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I love that ending and " a lark descends"
A romantic and passionate piece Eileen. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader) |
3/25/2007 |
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| (heavy sigh)... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/25/2007 |
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| As a lark descends - quite lovely, Tiger Lily. |
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| Reviewed by Miss Pandora |
3/25/2007 |
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| This is exquisite and saved, the theme and meter blend superbly with the music. Lady M ...do you have mischief on your mind? ;) Transported ty, love Imp x |
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| Reviewed by Laura Mayer |
3/25/2007 |
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Eilenn, this whole package is beautiful. Enjoyed.
Hugs, Laura |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/24/2007 |
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Beautiful Eileen
a lovely passionate write
enjoyed
Love & Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/24/2007 |
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| passionately provocative and divinely penned ... |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
3/24/2007 |
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I could hear Barry White singing in the background.
Erotically sensational!
Thanks
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
3/24/2007 |
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A romantic write, full of passion and sensual desire...beautiful, enjoyed this my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by Gloria Gay |
3/24/2007 |
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| Sweet and with what is in all our hearts but few acknowledge: romance. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
3/24/2007 |
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| This oozes with romantic passion and the pic is fabulous. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
3/24/2007 |
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| super sunset to go with a super romantic poem Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/24/2007 |
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Eileen, you descended right into my heart with this breathtaking write; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels |
3/24/2007 |
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| I enjoyed your poetry on this wonderful day!!!! |
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| Reviewed by J M |
3/24/2007 |
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The lark has such a beautiful call and this would serenely capture the ambience of this romantic interlude between two. The art you chose is warm and beautiful for this poem Wonderful EILEEN!!!!!!!!!!! Moment capture in sound, view and reading .....
Love Josie |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
3/24/2007 |
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The ambiance you have created with sound byte, and thoughts, and image, is masterful sugar chum. This is classic ET Waldron! You are one unique kinda girl - you know that? Brava!
Light and Wisdom ... |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/24/2007 |
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Eileen,
GORGEOUS!!!!!!!!!! Beautifully penned passion: well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. |
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| Reviewed by Tactfully Naive |
3/24/2007 |
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A lark descends in tandem with the descending bass line of love until the evening shades are drawn.
When the moon goes home, our shadows follow.
Atmospheric.
Dai |
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