The Heart that Beats
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Sunday, April 01, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Nothing like strong heart and soul... |
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The heart that beats,
also loves and completes,
determines victories
and defeats.
It is surely glorious,
to be victorious.
Much joy greets,
as the heart defeats.
The soul joins in,
together the heart
and soul win.
The person hardly
feels the thumps,
as the body moves
on its bumps.
When the heart
is strong,
it thumps joyous song.
Life becomes a
smoother ride,
with less
slip and slide.
One
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/2/2007 |
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Uplifting write!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
4/1/2007 |
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Wonderful poem. Grady!!!!! ;o)
May Lu |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/1/2007 |
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Very comforting poem One! I feel better having read it;-)
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
4/1/2007 |
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Very uplifting.
Chrissy |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
4/1/2007 |
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...and then again, a heart can be used by many as a pincushion, remember those on the wrong end, then, we hope they have a strong soul and an unlimited capacity to forgivness.
A perky rhyms on this one.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by J M |
4/1/2007 |
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All I can say is there is oodles of wisdom in this poem and you Poet are wise. Beautiful work.
Blessings & peace,
Josie |
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