|Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
|Jeff, I think this is an amazing song...it needs desperately to be sung and not from the words of your pen. Someone needs to discover this...get it out to the right people. I think you have a winner here even though I know it sings of a ravaged heart. It looks like all the ladies are ready to catch you if you are falling...
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|This song captured a lot your heart is feeling Jeff!
Your friends are HERE!
Know that dear!
Reach out and we aren't far!
We care and you know this I swear!
Your poem hit home to a lot of lonely sad souls!
This is a gem I will keep!
Thank you for sharing this offering Jeff!
WArmly, WArrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|another graceless fall...."I seem to have too many of those myself, good write|
|Reviewed by Miss Pandora
|a heart torn, ...there are few things more painful as it has such a wide and far-reaching effect in so many areas of life. That persistent ache you have captured superbly well. Bravo. Panda :)|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara
|Jeff you need not feel abandoned my dear! Not with so many friends here, and me to catch you! ;0)
Such a sad and haunting piece that you have penned here so very well! I am glad to be able to read your work again my dear friend!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I could feel this song....so painfully raw in the feeling!!
Well written Jeff!!
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Ouch this is a bucket full of pain Jeff! Well penned.|
|Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly
|One thing about going down is there is no other place to go but up! Thank you for sharing your touching prose. My best, Gloria|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I think each of us must decide that for ourselves, Jeff, and I think most of us have felt the same at certain times in our lives, I know I have.
Quite powerful, and wishing you a Happy Friday, too.
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|One need not pick up all the pieces that have shattered all around. Leave them shed like a winters coat. Then one never has extra baggage from the past. Hence next time one falls it shall be gracefully. Good write on how the mind dreads the future based on the past. Lady J|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
This touched my heart. Amazing poem filled with pain.