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|Reviewed by Shawn Stroud
|A powerful write, I really enjoyed this read. The last two lines are stunning, and made me want to read the poem all over again. Very nice work here!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|A powrefull offering.....bullseye of a write...right??
Love Tinka :)
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Spot on perfection: we don't know America, do we? A dark current of hatred flows down bloodied streets of discrimination against any who are considered "different": gays, lesbians, disabled, minority...well done. I will be reading more of your words.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|I once looked Acirema up and never knew that this place actually existed and you'd be surprised who owns land there...
As for the write~ you penned a thought provoking piece that stirs ones other view on how hurtful people can actually be...and for what? So they themselves can be self-fullfilled?
Enjoyed this and the thoughts that linger...
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Very powerful indeed|
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|Quite a powerful write.|