by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Sunday, April 22, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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We all are guilty of having some type addiction.
Sometimes I wonder about
being a poet,
before I joined AD
I did not know it.
What don't kill,
suppose to make a stronger will.
After five years of writing verse,
I'm thinking I have a poetic curse.
But there are things much worse.
All addictions affect about the same,
there's no need to call any by name.
But I've got to mention one,
one is better than none.
Life is an addiction,
with or without its restriction.
Don't do this
and don't do that,
bring in the hog,
slaughter him when he's fat.
Eating too much pork isn't good,
neither is a termite eating house wood.
Tell the termite,
he will still feel he's right.
I wonder if Ad puts a limit on
how much we can write,
seems I'm about like the termite.
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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Guilty as charged!!
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|One...writing is like breathing, you can't do too much of it.
As for pork-chops...go on grilling, I heard that chilli-sauce make wonders on your tongue afterwards.
Bon appetit!!! and go on writing:
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
I am addicted to this writing game; have over 2,600 stories here. I wonder how much more I can write too, but as long as my muse allows it, I shall continue to do so. And I hope you do, too; the Den would be a much sadder place without your rhyming thought provoking poems! Very well done yet again, One! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Enjoyed One, keep em coming! Always a pleasure to read your work!
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|Ad places no limit that I know of ------- keep on bringing to us your creative talent. R|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|"I wonder if Ad puts a limit on
how much we can write"
Hope not, as I got about 1200 or so, plus/minus, more than you...ed