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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
3/25/2003 |
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| Well written ! |
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| Reviewed by Goldberry |
1/31/2003 |
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| Fintan, that is wonderful! It has so much movement and climb. Don't be so modest with commenting on your poetry. Keep on writing more. |
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| Reviewed by Benjamin Marks |
12/9/2002 |
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| Outstanding. It comes from your heart, which (in my mind) makes it the best kind of poetry. The very best kind of writing! |
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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
8/5/2002 |
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| Eloquent. Simply astounding. Now stop being good, it puts pressure on me to keep up. |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Lasher |
8/3/2002 |
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| I liked it :) |
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| Reviewed by Shelagh McKenna |
7/6/2002 |
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Wonderful pacing. Starting slowly in short bursts, rising to climactic eloquence, resolving in a simple, honest statement. Kudos to you.
(P.S. I can't get used to 'lay' instead of 'lie'. Otherwise it's super.) |
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| Reviewed by authorauthor |
7/3/2002 |
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best poem i ever read...do you have a motor bike? seriously, one of the most honest and moving of poems except for poetry in The Song of Soloman and the Psalms
your most humble servant, philia |
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| Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon |
6/29/2002 |
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Sweet, affectionate and I am sure the lady appreciates the emotions, my friend. Great poem! :)
Love, Silver |
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| Reviewed by Peter Elmore (Reader) |
6/29/2002 |
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| Great poem, short easy to read and right to the point!!! |
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| Reviewed by Peter Elmore (Reader) |
6/28/2002 |
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| Very nice Duane |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/28/2002 |
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| very good presentment of fellings... |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/28/2002 |
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| Excellent. |
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| Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader) |
6/28/2002 |
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| Beautiful poetry, very honest indeed. Good write! |
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| Reviewed by Denise |
6/27/2002 |
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| Very sweet and touching. Will treasure always. mmmmm vanilla |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/27/2002 |
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| it's very good, I like it...lovely expressions of love...;-) |
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