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Debashish Haar

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Amorphous
by Debashish Haar
Thursday, May 03, 2007
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All those shapes
that she assumes
in the language shadow

melt and gather
in a beehive

where his grief
deserts her.

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Reviewed by jude forese 5/6/2007
it would seem her honey is not sweet enough to appease his sadness ...
Reviewed by J M 5/5/2007
In this, short and yet profound observation of human lives you capture two unique views and emotions of life. The perception is outstanding the busy bees hive offers a small warning of split infinity. Well captured and scribed Poet Debashish!

Blessings,
Joselyn
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 5/4/2007
Great imagery..
Happy to read you again...
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen 5/4/2007
I keep reading this over and over...wonderful imagery!
With love,
Susan
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 5/4/2007
A refreshing and profound write...wonderful imagery within. Enjoyed this very much. Penned well!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/3/2007
Excellent little number you have penned, Debs; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/3/2007
So refreshing to read you again, Debs... and what confidence to drop by with 21 words! All meaningful and none wasted. Very concrete, and a paradox to the title. The fancy footwork of bees can perhaps become very tiring for the beekeeper whose whistle wanes after having whistled long into a dappled wind. An impressionistic response, but there you go! :)) Wrote recently on the Language of Stone - reminds me somehow of my thoughts on the "inference of marble"... I'm very fond of your bee/honey writes... TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Chanti Niven 5/3/2007
Those first few lines are intriguing. The last, enigmatic. Meaning will be ascribed subjectively by the reader. A good write!
Chanti
Reviewed by William DeVault 5/3/2007
there is something profound and fun here...I must think...I must think...
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 5/3/2007
It is amazing how unaware we can be when we are so aware.......

Great write!
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