|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|An Excellent and romantic beauty
thankd for sharing LaBeblle
love & peace
|Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
|I know a poem is very special, even before reading it, when I am refered to it by another... such a compliment to your poetry, Belle. There is just so much to identify with here as you take us from one passionnate memory to another.
give me all your bad boy passion
your roguishness and sensuality
the part that causes you to speak
those unspeakable things a “Lady”
would be shocked to hear in public
This is just one of the many concepts of extreme love and trust that I find so truly believable. I love the way you put your thoughts into words.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Blimey, La Belle, you just go from strength to strength... Your Poetic Vintage is only just Coming Of Age.... But nothing debutante about this delightful and soul-stirring write, that's for sure. That last stanza, for me, would work perfectly on its own, but the whole has a wonderful build to it. These lines my fav:
give me your now.... all i ask is now
and all your heart in this moment
lifetimes are candles in the wind
broken winged birds braving hurricanes
our bodies breathe, then breath is gone...
all your inner and outer beauty to worship
bed all your hard years and unmet needs
in the soft warmth of my love
... and music is just MWAH, too! TY and bless you, Kate xx :))
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Andy has the right idea Belle, sweat love verse|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Okies I'll try, seya in the potting shed...|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|An utter beauty La Belle!!
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
What an extremely passionate poem! Just think how wonderful Life would be if we lived each and every moment like this.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
|Reviewed by Richard Bryant (Reader)
|A romantic hautningly beautiful write Belle.|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|La Belle, wonderful verse blended well with the music. A romantic moment for us all.
|Reviewed by Butch Howard
|Bell this is stunningly beautiful. It reminds me of the intense passion I feel when I'm with the special girl I love.
"open wide to me the gates of your soul
embrace my spirit within yours"
This is the perfect description of what happens. Excellent piece!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Like the music...
|Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
|very beautiful heartfelt poem - excellent, Nicky x|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
insistent lips that kiss me breathless
and make me dizzy with desire
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|passionate and emotionally felt|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|wonderful sentiments to a beautiful poem ...|
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Very passionate pen Belle|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Oh, La Belle...I am so there, to greet you two, courtesan in an untraditional way, awaiting this ship to dock, I have a wicker basket filled to the brim with wine and warm towels saturated with fresh-squeezed lemons to wash your faces...and fresh, starched 180-thread-count sheets, rose petals and tallow candles...and the sand glass is ticking...cartography maps are blushing!