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| Reviewed by Portia Burton |
1/23/2013 |
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So true! Yeah ,woolves are out there!
-Portia |
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| Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger |
2/8/2011 |
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| well written. Mary |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
4/11/2009 |
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| Nicely done. This has a powerful ending. |
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| Reviewed by Anze Mofor |
1/6/2009 |
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| Truth in art. Love it. Every Woman has had to face this one way or another. You did so well. Thank you. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
10/17/2008 |
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| Nice work |
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| Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse |
7/17/2008 |
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During my nightclub years, I saw many men like this come into the club--say anything to get the one thing he wanted and move on as soon as it is delivered. The kids I taught called these kind of guys 'players'.
Sincerely,
Lloyd |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
7/5/2008 |
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Very well done! An all too familiar situation for many people. Thanks for sharing
Ed |
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| Reviewed by little blue angel |
6/7/2007 |
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a mask they wear for all the world to see but when the door is closed the mask comes off and the monster is released.
love ya Blue angel |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
6/2/2007 |
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She should KICK him in the Planters..
I love you different styles of writing.
Hugs and more.... |
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| Reviewed by o Lady_Desdinova |
6/1/2007 |
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| yes have been there too... many wear masks, facades od friendship or love, but eventually the mask must be removed or it disintegrates revealing what lies behind-luv ya PA-lady D |
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| Reviewed by Michael LaSalle |
5/23/2007 |
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Brilliant knowledge PA~ i loved this, so many times i often wonder
why some people change out of the blue, you bring it into a perspective that truly sheds a light on the meaning of.
as well as cause the reader to ponder, "mask of love"... couldnt have been written any better... |
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| Reviewed by Jennifer Howard (Reader) |
5/16/2007 |
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| I can actually say you seem to be writing the words straight from my heart. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/15/2007 |
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Powerfully stated sadness in verse: hidden behind a mask of deceit and lies, they will be revealed...well done, SC.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/15/2007 |
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Sad how men change when they promise to cherish their wives...but not all are, thank the Lord. Excellent thought provoker you have penned, Southern Comfort; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Little Twister. :) |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
5/15/2007 |
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| Thought provoking pen. You may want to change madien to Maiden (You had me wondering, and then searching for the meaning of Madien). True some men are like this, but for women's sake I thank God most are not.Enjoyed the pen. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
5/15/2007 |
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Powerful emotion! - It describes a fierce dragon surfacing under his skin, turning him into a stranger right in front of your eyes. we run into this scenario at one time or another.
Well-expressed. Take care!
Sandie Angel :o( |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/15/2007 |
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A very powerful write. Deceit and hidden lies come to the surface sooner or later.
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/15/2007 |
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Girl, if ever a man disrespect you, don't wait until he says that he didn't meant it, that he don't gonna do that no more; girl, just kick his bells just once, but hard and when you are at it throw is sorry ass out and change the doors locks.
You will feel better and he will think twice in the future to do the mean act to someone else.
Georg |
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