|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|This is so full of heart-felt and sincere longing and the desire to mutually give. Depth of feeling expressed on all levels of body, mind and soul and focussed in the body and eyes, which is, of course, the signficant and truth-telling focal point. The clarity of expression with the repetitions make this a very strong write which reads well and reinforces what it speaks of. Love the intensity here. TY and Welcome! :)) Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|SWEEEEEEEET! and Endearing!
I like your style!
WArmly,WArrior Spirit Lady Sheee
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
|Excellent rhythm and sincerity my friend.
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Great poem of love and romance. Nice flow and rhymes beautifully|