|Reviewed by Amy Feemster
|I love this one, beautiful useage of I don't have enough english backround to state it properly but the application of common sentence structure applied to relationship/fantasy meaning. The concept is one that never dawned on me, I like it, very refreshing read! Amy.|
|Reviewed by Katherine Chandler
|This was simply brilliant the way
you describe feelings for the reader
to ponder in their own lives. The
music was perfect behind your words.
A very creative piece of writing.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|you are the queen of romance...a classic offering!!
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Just beautiful as always,Hugsssss|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You have flung these words quite well, La Belle.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Oh how I love your poetry!
Perfection to say the least..
yup, there's only ONE La Belle Rouge! YAY!
saved this one..
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Beautifully penned Belle. Though I'm not one for background music, this tune adds a softness that mingles with velvet words.|
|Reviewed by H Cruz
|I only have an adjective for those parenthesis, but a few adverbs do come to mind!|
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|nice play of words, and punctuation...:)|
|Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
|Romance, heartache, longing....Classic loveliness! Lydi**|
|Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci
|I really like this one Labelle it say so much to me
I especially like this stanza
if i close my eyes and mind
i can smell sandalwood and sweat
|Reviewed by o Lady_Desdinova
|beautiful la belle, this is really an exquisite dance with words|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Expressed so well..
i can ride that train of thought
through each junction of pleasure
to the exclamation point of ecstasy
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Sorry, I was caught up in the music...this is a perfect write and pity the poor fool that was lost in his verbosity, he will never be able to appreciate what splendor he allowed to slip away.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
This is word usage at it's best my friend.
|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|No Baby Girl, He was a cowardly, nightmare and you are TOO GOOD, for that ole slime bucket! Reality Check: YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL YOU ARE WONDERFUL and ONLY DESERVE THE CREAM OF THE CROP. YOU DESERVE A HERO, NOT A ZERO! I LOVE YOU! Sissy|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Excellent, Labelle, definitely a keeper--and one of your best! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|This is beautifully poignant, La Belle, one of your best. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|i love the way you expressed this...your verb encased within my parenthesis...sexy words poet|
|Reviewed by Lewis Findley (Reader)
|sounded like a magnifiscent ride, dear.|