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A Word Fling
by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Thursday, May 31, 2007
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Riding That Train Of Thought


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A Word Fling
By La Belle Rouge

itís on nights like this
when itís too hot to sleep
in a cold bed

i think of all the adjectives
that described the noun of us
and spelled our demise

words like, intense, magnificent,
rare, consuming, priceless, perfect

and other words iíd prefer to forget
like cowardly, apathetic
indecisive, entraped

if i close my eyes and mind
i can smell sandalwood and sweat

there are no adverbs to describe
the movement of your verb
encased within my parenthesis

i can ride that train of thought
through each junction of pleasure
to the exclamation point of ecstasy

but then, i was just your word fling
and you...you were only a poetic dream


5/31/2007 La Belle Rouge

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Reviewed by Amy Feemster 3/9/2008
I love this one, beautiful useage of I don't have enough english backround to state it properly but the application of common sentence structure applied to relationship/fantasy meaning. The concept is one that never dawned on me, I like it, very refreshing read! Amy.
Reviewed by Katherine Chandler 6/12/2007
This was simply brilliant the way
you describe feelings for the reader
to ponder in their own lives. The
music was perfect behind your words.
A very creative piece of writing.

Love,
Katherine
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/1/2007
you are the queen of romance...a classic offering!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 6/1/2007
Just beautiful as always,Hugsssss
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/1/2007
You have flung these words quite well, La Belle.
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa 5/31/2007
Oh how I love your poetry!
Perfection to say the least..
yup, there's only ONE La Belle Rouge! YAY!
saved this one..

Vesna:)
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 5/31/2007
Beautifully penned Belle. Though I'm not one for background music, this tune adds a softness that mingles with velvet words.
Reviewed by H Cruz 5/31/2007
I only have an adjective for those parenthesis, but a few adverbs do come to mind!
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 5/31/2007
nice play of words, and punctuation...:)
Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader) 5/31/2007
Romance, heartache, longing....Classic loveliness! Lydi**
Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci 5/31/2007
I really like this one Labelle it say so much to me
I especially like this stanza

if i close my eyes and mind
i can smell sandalwood and sweat
Reviewed by o Lady_Desdinova 5/31/2007
beautiful la belle, this is really an exquisite dance with words
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 5/31/2007
Expressed so well..

i can ride that train of thought
through each junction of pleasure
to the exclamation point of ecstasy

Fabulous....
Reviewed by D Johnson 5/31/2007
Sorry, I was caught up in the music...this is a perfect write and pity the poor fool that was lost in his verbosity, he will never be able to appreciate what splendor he allowed to slip away.

Thanks,
Dan
Reviewed by Paul Berube 5/31/2007
Belle,

This is word usage at it's best my friend.
Reviewed by Southern Comfort 5/31/2007
No Baby Girl, He was a cowardly, nightmare and you are TOO GOOD, for that ole slime bucket! Reality Check: YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL YOU ARE WONDERFUL and ONLY DESERVE THE CREAM OF THE CROP. YOU DESERVE A HERO, NOT A ZERO! I LOVE YOU! Sissy
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/31/2007
Excellent, Labelle, definitely a keeper--and one of your best! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/31/2007
This is beautifully poignant, La Belle, one of your best. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Sue Hess 5/31/2007
i love the way you expressed this...your verb encased within my parenthesis...sexy words poet
Reviewed by Lewis Findley (Reader) 5/31/2007
sounded like a magnifiscent ride, dear.



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