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by H J Cruz

Monday, June 04, 2007
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Here's mud in your eye. :)

If I had the time to add a picture and a symphony it would be here!









What will beckons a toilsome lot?

Tender mercies, tender memories; lifeís infirmaries,

Spilling sociolinguistic harmonies; lifeís wrought,

Articulate, clever twisted, burning; Immaculate

Shine on!


I heard your laughter; I felt your pain,

I shared your passion; dreamy loves, insane (clinically)

Shine on!


Hegemonic hedonisms, the rule of late,

Plumbing erotic depths, cries of mortal fate,

  Querying body/ mind/ spirit,

Crafted cleverly; or ya jus smear it.

Shine on!


From promenades to accolades; behold a shrine,

Multitudinal faces from diverse places,

Trumpeting posie, bold, whacky and kind,

                       To the jokers, one eyed jacks, queens & aces.

Shine on!


Slithery sleuths, oh decadent muse,

Praising lords, clashing swords, cosmic noose,

Crushed petals, pungent essence wailing,

Upon languid pools of conscious craving!

Shine on!


Excrement, excitement, literary enslavement,

Corridors of echoes, torn from lifeís masterpiece,

Illusive illocution; illuminating Iliadís,

Creaking cloaked calluses; contemporary crooners.





H.J. Cruz


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/23/2007
A unique and creative write that is meaningful as well. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,

Reviewed by George Thompson 6/20/2007
This is excellent writing full of imagination, alliteration, metaphors and metaphysical as well. Enjoyed the read.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 6/17/2007
Excellent poetry with a wonderful flow. Well done my friend
Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. 6/16/2007
Well crafted poetic journey my friend.....


Reviewed by Mary Coe 6/16/2007
Outstanding! Good write.
Reviewed by Morning Star 6/10/2007
Such a superb piece of prose,
Beautiful emotions and tone
And brilliant vocabulary this poem
Does Shine on All through this page
And in my mind!
Outstanding poetic thoughts!
Love Peace and Happiness....Morning Star
Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce 6/10/2007
HAHAHAHA!!!!!! This is AWESOME!!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by nancy weston 6/9/2007
Ahh this would be brilliant in spoken word, great emotional creativities H.J.

You do realise the more I read you the more I hate you right? Ahh just joking, but you just keep getting better.
Reviewed by Theresa curnow 6/9/2007
I enjoyed this poem although I must admit I too am a little ignorant as to what some of the words mean. Never mind me, I'm just a dumb blonde! Great write though and very powerful, love Theresa.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 6/9/2007
Yes, Shine On! Let your light beam thousands of watts for all to see, shine on! Very intense poem, but understood...:Loved it!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 6/8/2007
I believe this to be great poetry..
Shine on....
Reviewed by Candy T (Reader) 6/7/2007
this is fab! i have no idea what some of the words mean, but they roll so nicely off my tongue that i don't think that it really matters. yes, i am as ignorant as everybody else, i just dress it up in finer clothing :)
Reviewed by jude forese 6/6/2007
excellent poem with some nicely developed alliteration in the concluding lines ...
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/6/2007
Interesting take on the reality of writing and the offerings of the poets trunk. Well done.

Reviewed by Southern Comfort 6/5/2007
Ah Yes, Beautiful Brave, Shine On! Would love it if yore passion muse paid a visit, bet you could, send heap big smoke signals SC
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 6/5/2007
Glad you got that OUT! Sir H.
Shine ON - You did- YOu Crazy Awesome diamond!
PINK Floyd STILL Rules!!!!
WArmly, WArrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
STay Happy!
Healthy and Positive!
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/5/2007
I am sorry to say that the fonts of this poem came out like small squares and I couldn't read it.
But, by the response it has got....WOW!
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 6/5/2007
Great writing, enjoyed...Hugssssssssss
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 6/5/2007
Let that pen flow in your "literary enslavement". A drama of the mind...
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 6/5/2007
Ah the poets, they shine, in the heights, in the depths. Shine on H. I love this poem.
Reviewed by George Carroll 6/4/2007
You paint a vivid picture in words that will always shine on.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/4/2007
Now you're sounding like Creator, let everything shine on!;-)
A lot of thought went into this gem!

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) 6/4/2007
Shine on! I think I'll just take your word for this. Lady J
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury 6/4/2007
"All the Worlds a Stage" and your poems has the frames that make art shine on!
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 6/4/2007
This is just Damn exciting! Shine on really says alot. Hang a shingle out HJ...I could lay on your Jungian couch all day, pay for a therapy session with no Freudian slips...transformation diverse and the philosopher's stone...this is a Dylan moment...everybody must get stoned...this is the line that makes me want to stay--->

"From promenades to accolades; behold a shrine, Multitudinal faces from diverse places"

be well, Cruz, Blessed Be...


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