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Please help: Should the title be 'In Silence' or as is?

As he lay dying

 

She stroked his hair

 

In silence

 

After he trembled and

 

Breathed one final time

 

She took his thin hands,

 

Still warm,

 

And folded them across his stomach

 

In silence

 

The way she left the room

 
 
 

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Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
I found a man/neighbour on the floor dying,nothing in his eyes, no reponse I dived through his window, kept his airwaves free. Cut a long story short, he was expected to die that night, but by Gods Grace I got there in time to give primary aid and the paramedics and NHS are just brilliant...He's now off life support, thinks everyones in his home..lol But I've seen the old feller and by the grace of God he will be fine... And of course living here we get all our medical care free....



Well Timed poem..
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
I personally like 'In Silence' for the title. It seems more fitting.

Chrissy
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
An excellent and moving write my friend...I like the title you have, it allows the reader to ponder the questions...How do you spell love, what is love, or how do we measure love? While your poem solves the mystery and questions with an unexpected answer! Enjoyed my friend, leave it as!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Excellent writing,enjoyed....Hugsss
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Randall,

Excellence; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Brett Moore
This is a great story poem. I wouldn't use the title "In Silence" because it is used alot in the poem and might be too obvious of a title. That's just me though. Anyway, really liked this one.

Brett
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
This is moving in its very simplicity, Randy...great work~

Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Wow! a very poignant write-
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Randall,
Exceptional poetry. In silence she left the room, but inside she was in turmoil. She had lost her best friend, companion, the love of her life. So much can be read between the lines in this excellent write.

Many blessings,
~Linda
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