After The Lovin
by Southern Comfort
Sunday, June 10, 2007
Rated "R" by the Author.
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After we make love, Baby, I purr like a contented cat!
My lips are swollen from your onslaught of kisses, my hair a tangled mane,
My eyes are glazed by sated lust, the passion beast was tamed.
My nipples still tingle from your constant use,
My valley lies peacefully, enjoying the truce.
You, my stallion, lay snoring at my side,
Exhausted from our previous wild ride.
Your gentle giant lulls in the shade,
Exceedingly proud of the progress he's made.
The pungent aroma of passion assults the air,
Musk and rose scent can be detected there.
We lie amid the tangled sheets,
Two weary comrades happily admitting defeat.
Your hand gently stroking my back, making me purr,
I snuggle close to you and fall under the spell of sleep's lure.
Music: All Night Long
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|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|All of the day and All of the Night...
Isn't that what love is? or should be
but of course love doesn't = sex or
the other way round, but hell who's
complaining...not I SC
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Your imagery here brings the reader to the foot of the bed almost like a mother visiting a sleeping child. It awakes all the senses..sight,sounds and smellsand only one line or actually just one word is off and that is the one that ends in defeat, for surely with such passion no defeat...perhaps a draw.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|All night long? please, surface and take a breath! how much cake can you eat?
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Wow this is a very musical night
Of passion and sensuality
Love the imagery your words captured
And the flow!
I love the view of sensual feelings you
Brought out in this Piece!!
I love it!!
Love Peace and Happiness to you...Morning Star
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Seems a sweet time to me, P.A. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I thought it was partay all night long
not sleep all night long..
Oh well, you and Leroy need your rest..
You are amazing SC....
PS too much lovin can make you prettier-grumpier-etc...
Hugs to ya and I'll hold off on the kissen. Your swollen remember
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|You blighter I was just off to bed, now you have me up....|