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| Reviewed by Katherine Chandler |
7/1/2007 |
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What a beautifully written Senryu, Butch.
A love song between two people in love and
it just doesn't get any better than this!
Love and hugs,
Kate |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/22/2007 |
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Your love and appreciation shine through these verses, Butch. Sweetly expressed. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/20/2007 |
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Butch,
There's magic in your words. Beautiful write!
Many blessings,
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
6/19/2007 |
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| Truly exquisite Butch. I especially love that last verse, full of promise. |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
6/18/2007 |
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I felt as though I were in an audience watching 'love' meet and magic happen.. lovely senryu series Butch.
Always,
Myrna |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Ryan |
6/17/2007 |
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You've really sent my mind spinning with this wonderful senryu, Butch. The visuals you create are so real, it's as if I can see them on a silver screen in a reel to reel progression of love at first sight in a whirlwind of romance.
The senryu form continues to be a springboard for you style and word artistry, (loved the use of thaumaturgic), my friend. You must write a sequel to this glorious tribute to the love of your life....and that eternity of moments. If the beginning is this captivating and imageric, I can only imagine how inspiring the future will be.
Love,
Taylor |
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
6/16/2007 |
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Glorious senryu Butch!!
How deep the indescribable love... Very well portrayed in this amazing sequence.
And, thank you, I learnt something new: promising miracles!
Love, Suzie :-D
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| Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia |
6/16/2007 |
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Spectacular reunion! Spectacular senryu!
Have a spectacular Father's day, too, Butch!
Lots of blessings, Rhonda
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/15/2007 |
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| inspired sentiment in the well-devised senryu ... |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
6/15/2007 |
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Beautiful write, sounds like a soulmate to me. You've penned a wonderful write full of genuine emotions. Enjoyed this much my friend.
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/15/2007 |
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Sounds like a life long relationship in the making here. The flame of love will be as an eternal torch burning bright....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
6/15/2007 |
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The magic of alchemy, the open space of love's thoroughfare unites once again after separation drove for miles knowing twin souls can never be too far apart from one another, nor denied the physical, geographical, spiritual and emotional...through the dross, the eternal shine polishes the fate of eternity through life's ever-winding highways...forever and always, Butch...be well...Blessed Be.
your friend,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader) |
6/15/2007 |
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| Ah, yes, it is indeed a sweet eternity when you know you have found the love of your life - your soulmate! Stellar vocabulary in this exceptionally emotional write, Butch. Wonderful! Lydi** |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
6/15/2007 |
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| Breathtaking and sensuous ! Thanks for you kind comments...M |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
6/15/2007 |
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| There is a finely tuned magical feeling you've captured here Butch. Your derivative of thaumaturgy is well chosen, and adds spiritual depth to your sentiments. Well done! |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
6/15/2007 |
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Great word play, here. I can tell that you're hooked for life.
Those well-used words didn't fool me a-tall ! ! !
- Bill
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/15/2007 |
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masterfully written ! Thanks for sharing!
ET |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
6/15/2007 |
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Really a great write...and now I need to go look up a word.
Thanks,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by J M |
6/15/2007 |
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Oh Butch this one allows us to feel the depth of your love for her. BEAUTIFUL.................
Blessings & peace always,
Josie |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
6/15/2007 |
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| I can picture this spirit of love that was meant to be simply because of your "seamless continuum". Enjoyed |
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