Waiting To Be Broken
by Dena L. Moore
Sunday, June 17, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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It’s a constant thing,
A betrayal everlasting,
This heart….always on the mend,
Waiting to be broken again.
So fragile, so strong,
And the blood, oh, how fiercely it flows…
And the thump and the crash,
That sinking, hot-cold feeling,
How well I know it all, an eternal theme,
My own, this heart, this shattered,
Battered, scattered thing…
Dena L Moore
June 17, 2007
A big thanks and appreciation to everyone who has taken the time to read and comment on my work.
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|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|powerful piece here...emotionally, it is something most can relate to...for there is no pain like that of a broken heart.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
I've been told many times that the heart is so resilient but that never eases the pain whenever it's broken anew. Your poem shows its vulnerability so well. Bless You Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Your heart must be strong to withstand all the breaking.....Enjoyed.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Think I'll become a eunuch....|
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|How well one knows the essence of their own very heart...you express this well within this poem...