An Act of Congress
by Kimmy Van Kooten
Thursday, June 21, 2007
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Someone yelled, Oh My God!
...and then I felt like I was swimming
in a long tunnel
with no light
bouncing off the walls, searching for a reason...
Propelled by some motivator
I was feeling my way through
thinking, if only I could see in the dark!
If only I could see...
Now wait... what’s up ahead?
It looks like someone’s home, and they left the light on!
So, I’m beating and I’m beating...
and when I couldn’t get an answer, I just forced my way in!
...if only I could get a hand!... now, I’m yelling,
saying things like, I’d walk a mile for even a foot to have such opportunity!
And, this...this could be the moment of our life;
the one we don’t have to wait for, they just come...
Well, I made it alright, Here I am!
Exchanging DNA between cell mates
Who makes up the rules, anyway?
Is this really going to be my final destination?
From here on out.., I guess, .it just me and you,
together. Forever.
That is, unless...someone stupid comes along, tries to ruin our life by ripping us apart,
in order to kill all the possibilities of
our new future together!
No, baby...we’ll do our time...and when that sweet little lady,
who screamed, "Oh my God!", way back when, sees us,
She’ll be so happy its all over!
I’ll be wailing, and you’ll probably pee on the doctor!
Copyright 2007
Kimmy Van Kooten
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
7/15/2007 |
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Wow! YOu do amaze me!
What a story in your mind!
A definite giggle and smiles!
Warmest Blessings!WArmly, Warior Lady Sheeeoox
YOU and YOurs,
STAy Positive!
STay SAFE!
:)
Namaste! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/24/2007 |
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You did a great jobo.....this is way too funny..thanks for the smiles!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines |
6/23/2007 |
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Giggle! Kimmers, you have outdone yourself, and that's saying a lot! And, as for peeing on the doctor, well, he's just a peon anyway. Well done, Kimmy. You might send this one to Art With Words (I'll bet Debra would giggle, too).
Ted |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/22/2007 |
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You make your points using wit and humor, Kimmy. Well done. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/22/2007 |
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| Most Interesting! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/22/2007 |
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Very expressive and very origianal work Kimmy that I agree should be posted to little Miss Socialite or for that matter to all the celebrities who believe the law does not apply to them.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/21/2007 |
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| clever, humorous satire that is emphatically serious-minded ... |
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
6/21/2007 |
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Great write, Kimmy. Lots of emphasis with your well-placed words in italics.
George |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
6/21/2007 |
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| You send a strong message of light and life. Enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
6/21/2007 |
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| Excellent writing,enjoyed...HUgss |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
6/21/2007 |
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A very interesting write with a touch of humor
yet it lives you with much more to pondered about!
Great message within this write!!
Love Peace and Happiness....Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/21/2007 |
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| You sure have a gift for satire Kimmy!Dynamic poetry! |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/21/2007 |
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| Splendid tongue in cheek humor |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
6/21/2007 |
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Your humorous cynicism is refreshing Kimmy. Perhaps you should e-mail this to Paris in the clink. She could read it aloud at the evening meal.
Blessings ...
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/21/2007 |
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A delightful ready Kimmy! Enjoyed your fortitude of hanging in there to see things through....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
6/21/2007 |
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Good wrie, offers lots to talk about and much more to think about.
thanks,
dan |
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| Reviewed by Lew Duffey |
6/21/2007 |
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LOL!
God Bless,
Lew |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/21/2007 |
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LOL Too clever, Kimmy!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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