Captain OOOOO My Captain
by Southern Comfort
Saturday, June 23, 2007
Rated "R" by the Author.
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A Randy Pirate's Ghost was possessing me!
This is part one of a four part Write
Troubled and sad, I sought comfort at an Inn by the sea,
Although it was rumored to be haunted, it meant nothing to me.
The room I was given was lovely, airy and light,
So I was complaisant, as I settled down for the night.
My window suddenly burst open by a gust of wind,
That was the first time I met the Captain, when the haunting did begin.
I began to shudder, for I slept in the nude,
As my covers were jerked off of me, angey was my attitude!
" What the Hell!", I fumed and fussed,
I heard a male's chuckle, apparently amused that I had cussed!
I muttered," Get out of here, you pesty Cad!"
A lamp flew across the room, I had made somebody mad!
Then invisible pressure was applied to my lips,
My breasts were fondled by demanding fingertips.
I was thrown back against the bed and my legs spread apart,
Then a tingling sensation made me faint of heart!
I was held by strong hands, while fingers molested my glistening core,
Although orgasmic waves were rocking me,I was made to endure more!
I was whimpering and moaning, my body was out of control,
A ghostly spector was in charge and it was taking it's toll.
Suddenly I was impaled by a demanding shaft,
I begged for mercy, but was rewarded by a wicked laugh.
An eerie whisper said," You'll not soon forget this lay in the sack!"
" Twill make a woman of you, supply what you lack!"
" I am Randy, so I will take you again and again!"
" You will be my Love Slave and will spurn the advances of all other men!"
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|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Lord have mercy, how you inspire~
This write and your imagination is Super!
I have one of an alien, I made good good friends with!
Somewhere in my oldie but goodies!
YOurs is a sly crafty horny captain!
I love this SC, I am still smiling, got to get to the rest, this BETTER go into a book ~
WArmly, WArrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|The subject of ghost or demonic sexual intercourse has fascinated men and women almost as long as their has been the act of sex and your story encourages the mind to think how sensual this could be. Well done SC
|Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
|Well, being turned into a love slave is not my fantasy, but this is certainly an imaginative story - written well. Lydi**|
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Laws have mercy chile...do tell
what an imagination....
by the way, is there a Wench Motel?
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I swear girl you are so funny and sexy when you write of your Captain/Tarzan...;) lol, ed|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Oh my, even the pirate ghost want you..
Great sensuous writing sexy writer.....
|Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
|this will most definitly keep poetry alive!!!!!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Quite the start to your "tale!" This is one ghost who has not lost his "feeling." Thank you SC. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by H Cruz
|Was there any seamen left? He-he|