Captain OOOO My Captain ( 2 )
by Southern Comfort
Sunday, June 24, 2007
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This is part 2 of the Captain Saga
He was good to his word, for I was taken all night,
Never was he sated, ravenous was his appetite.
With the dawn, my lips were swollen from his passionate kisses throughout the night,
My body was drained, I was a lifeless, pitiful sight.
I forced myself to rise from the bed,
My body was shaking and thunder was rolling in my head.
I showered quickly and left my room,
I couldn't help but notice my cheeks held a rosy bloom.
I approached the desk clerk and informed him what had taken place,
I became annoyed when I saw amusement adorn his face.
A maid overheard me and pulled me aside,
" You have been visited by Captain Jack", she did confide.
She lead me to a picture of a Captain of the sea,
He was real and had made love to me!
As I gazed into the portrait's eyes, they twinkled with a mocking glint,
He was my Randy lover, the smug gent.
I went to breakfast and ate like a wolverine,
My body had been depleted and for nourishment, it did scream!
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|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Your words really amaze me, how you keep it all so thrilling!
Love how you added *( another character) maid now...
Smug gent... Awesome! and wolverine, what an added enticement!
YOu do these sexy erotica's so damn well, I am left in awe! of your GOLDEN pen~!
WArmly, WArrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeox
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Neat story you have going here..
|Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
|Captain Jack swabbed YOUR deck all right! LOL Good story, PA. Waiting for #3 here. Lydi**|