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Girl with neon eyes
by Amor Sabor
Saturday, June 30, 2007
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artwork in felt pen "Girl in Blue"
by Amor Sabor

Girl with Neon Eyes

She saw me through a neon prism
while reciting her own visions of love
while I, on the other side of waiting
was unaware that I lay within her eye

She approached in the form of ether
that rendered me in a subtle shade
reminiscent of a serene indifference
while every atom in my body cried

She transformed her refined affection
through vibrations that awoke my soul
with every sentient fiber of her being
directed towards each beat of my heart

She appeared within the midnight hour
to release me from the grasp of dream
leaving me speechless in her beauty
obvious even in the absence of light

She called me from the wispy shadows
where she lingered at the edge of night
waiting there for some kind of answer
that would impel me to be by her side

The girl with neon eyes approached me
that kissed me from far angles of illusion
that swayed me to the arch of the wind
tracing my heart with her dainty fingers

Causing me to sail headlong into her soul
and I had no alternate choice but comply
to the warm spirit of her ultimate obsession
and submit to the intimate reverence of light

© 2007 Amor Sabor

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Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce 7/31/2007

You are so talented! I had also tried to use felt-pen to draw too in the past, but the painting didn't come out good. It is very difficult to draw in felt-pen, but you have done a wonderful job with this painting.

Lovely work of art and poem!!! I loved them both!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 7/6/2007
This whole pkg, is filled with exuberance and color~!
Wow! I am stunned by your imagery and writing Amor!
Lovely, Gracious and down right pure!
Warmly,Warrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
BE Happy!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 7/3/2007
Absolutely stunning as always Amor.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 7/2/2007
Amor is right. Love this poem and it's sensual expressions. Liz
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/2/2007
Thank you for sharing your gifts, Amor. The whole offering is wonderful. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Dale Clark 7/2/2007
I enjoyed this Amor, it's dreamy and the refrence
to light is reverant for sure. I was caught by the
title also. It's mystical and dreamlike. Great!
Also the art is great.
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 7/2/2007
An excellent write, great imagery creates a a bit of mystical mood within the lines. Nice artwork, the two compliment each other well, great combination. Enjoyed!
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Theresa curnow 7/2/2007
wow, brilliant stuff. I loved this a lot and the artwork is fantastic. You are very and blessings, Theresa.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 7/1/2007
Just really awesome writing Amor..
Love the art work Amor..
Happy to read you again Amor..
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 7/1/2007
What a gem !! I particularly admire "on the other side of waiting"
and "obvious even in the absence of light." Plus you chose the
perfect illustration. B r a v o . ringed by flashing neon!! 'Pea' <3
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 7/1/2007
Love and longing, yet a need to be loved, well done!

Be safe,
Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg 7/1/2007
loved everything about this
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/1/2007
A beautiful ethereal poem,full of the richness of her actions,and your responses. Love the art too Amor!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 7/1/2007
A man after my own heart..I love this poem and your artwork is simply beautiful..I shall read more, I am enthralled by your words..
"comply to the warm spirit of her ultimate obsession and submit..." now that's an awakened soul!!!!

Peace, Love, and Light,
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 7/1/2007
It is a compliment when someone traps your person inside their eyelids. Your words are grateful for the chance to dance inside another's glance. It is music, passion and art.
Reviewed by Southern Comfort 7/1/2007
Just too beautiful for words! So I shall just SIGH in it's honor! HUGS! SC
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/1/2007
Outstanding are a very talentedartist AMOR!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 7/1/2007
lovely art: words and pic
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 7/1/2007
Beautiful writing,Hugsssssss
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) 7/1/2007
Haven't read anything of yours for a long time. Great as always. Beautiful mesmerising poetry.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 6/30/2007

Lordy, what you can do with words and a felt pen.

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