|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
|Too bad, you've been noticed.
I tend to find myself drawn to shoe-scrapings.
|Reviewed by Miranda Prather
|nice use of words here to tell the story, but more importantly your use and then subsequent dis-use of punctuation helps to create the strung out, rambling rampage of the speaker|
|Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
|Uh-oh! The guy's in trouble.. ;)|
|Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
|This kicks ass, Lara. Loved it.|
|Reviewed by Reilly
|U remind me of someone I know quite well, Aggresive piece|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|You're info on the Bio page is kick-ass. Love it. I don't go for rainbows either. ;) This is an excellent piece of poetry (art). Thank you so much for visiting my demented Den. lol
Blessings, Janet xoxoxoxo
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Great expression. I would not want to be noticed by this guy either.|