by Southern Comfort
Tuesday, July 10, 2007
Rated "R" by the Author.
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I am a creature of the night, when I see an attractive man, I wanna take a bite!
I awaken with a gnawing need,
I am ravenous and must feed.
Mandrake hears my movements and rushes to my side,
My need and pain are evident, my desire I cannot hide.
" Mistress, I shall help you dress and bring around the car",
" We shall find your meal at the local bar!"
Mandrake, my loyal male slave,
He will help me in my endeavor, to get what I crave.
He assists me in leaving my coffin bed,
His eyes hold concern, knowing I must be fed.
His hands stroke and caress my ivory body, I allow such liberties,
I have schooled him on how to please me.
His lips and tongue are at my disposal, they delve, suck and nip,
As they traverse my body, on a sensuous trip.
Mandrake's administerings has heightened my desire,
He dresses me quickly, while my body is still on fire.
I float to the Rolls and we speed off into the night,
I pant with anticipation, awaiting my sweet delight.
As we enter the bar, my eyes zero in on my prey,
His sexual appeal arouses me, I must have him without delay.
He is tall, dark and dreamy, a caramel delight,
My gaze hypnotizes him,he is captive in my sight.
He floats to me, my willing slave,
He will soon give me what I crave.
Mandrake helps me get him into the car,
I have him divested him before we get too far.
My hands, lips and tongue adorn his body, they arouse and entice,
He is a Vampire's dream, so very nice.
We arrive at my house and I lead him inside,
He is a nude, walking dream, with nothing to hide.
His beautiful body, now adorns my bed, I revel in it's sight,
My fangs appear, along with my lusty appetite.
I locate the sweetest meat, closest to the bone,
As my fangs sink in, I hear him moan.
My ravenous hunger will soon be sated,
Then my prey will be promptly mated!
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|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|I saw this movie, I know it's not a movie SC, but, it was about a Older women and sweet hunky black man, bringing young teens back to her lair, to feast on!
This was absoulutely delicous!!!! I loved every word and your taunt!
I just wrote of a cowriding couple!
then I come to yours, I saw Ravenous and said"I bet that's SC,s I oponed it and smiled.. Ahhhhhhhh... My girlsfr. is at again, LICK and Stir!
A gem I will savor!
as the neck I will gentle bite
and give you all my fine tasty delights
your blood will gurgle, with all I will unfurl!
tommor I will be back, with friends for another thirsty attack~!
Sorry S, Had too!
Oooooooooh, you do this to me, this thinggggg... ;) Stir my juices, is what you do!
You have to have a book, your writes are too delicious not too!
YOu have a sense of style in your writing, I just can't find!
Another Pat, another, I'm licking my lips!
WArm Hugs and Love, Warrior Sheee- love the music, it sets the theme! Oooooooooh- I have alot of nice Vamp/ pict.. colored and moving, send me your addr. girl, I'll send em' for your upcoming stories/poems! I'm so proud of you!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Did you happen to get some of Bela Lugosi?
You made him into a vampire didn't you?
Lurve the write...,
|Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
|Sexy vampire write...wooo hoooo! Lydi**|
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Wow...dang U is sholey one Pro....lific poet
always good stuff too
what a talent you have
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Stunning in the style of vampires with a gender delightful twist thrown in to make it a chilly hot one.