|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|An interesting concept . The way man started out is not what he has become ! MP|
|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
Guess we simply did not develop the way He expected us to. What went wrong?
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|Maybe we're so like God because we made him in our own image.
A very good poem, posing questions, raising doubts. We seem to be in danger of drowning in sentimentality
|Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
|Well, I do think the human race has a lot of potential, but it does seem to spawn far too many crazies. However, the accomplishments
of mankind are legion, and I think they fairly well outweigh the evil deeds done by man.
|Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme
|Well you are no loser - great write :0)|
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|lol, ain't we somethin' else? now, if this reality were something other than illusion, i think your observations might be valid. but since it is, perhaps the underlying reality makes a mockery of the dream, you think? wonderful and insightful work, poet.|
|Reviewed by D. Fitzpatrick
|Well, Glen, I think your poem hits a few nails
on the head. Good structure. Well chosen words. And, oh, thanks for your good review.
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|well, well, well shit how would I know I struggle just to survive that is a little too heavy for me to answer...ppl are ppl respect the difference and we can get along....if not oh well we have what we have
very interesting write
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Intresting...usually we carve our own destinies....|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Born or become? Maybe it's all downhill from birth... maybe not. Interesting write.|