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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
3/31/2005 |
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| An interesting concept . The way man started out is not what he has become ! MP |
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| Reviewed by Amira van Kerk |
6/23/2004 |
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Interesting write.
Guess we simply did not develop the way He expected us to. What went wrong? |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
10/10/2003 |
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Maybe we're so like God because we made him in our own image.
A very good poem, posing questions, raising doubts. We seem to be in danger of drowning in sentimentality |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
10/2/2003 |
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Well, I do think the human race has a lot of potential, but it does seem to spawn far too many crazies. However, the accomplishments
of mankind are legion, and I think they fairly well outweigh the evil deeds done by man. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme |
9/20/2003 |
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| Well you are no loser - great write :0) |
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
4/3/2003 |
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| lol, ain't we somethin' else? now, if this reality were something other than illusion, i think your observations might be valid. but since it is, perhaps the underlying reality makes a mockery of the dream, you think? wonderful and insightful work, poet. |
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| Reviewed by D. Fitzpatrick |
3/8/2003 |
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Well, Glen, I think your poem hits a few nails
on the head. Good structure. Well chosen words. And, oh, thanks for your good review.
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
7/6/2002 |
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well, well, well shit how would I know I struggle just to survive that is a little too heavy for me to answer...ppl are ppl respect the difference and we can get along....if not oh well we have what we have
very interesting write |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
7/6/2002 |
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| Intresting...usually we carve our own destinies.... |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
7/6/2002 |
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| Born or become? Maybe it's all downhill from birth... maybe not. Interesting write. |
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