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Ode to the Seduction Sisters
by H J Cruz

Wednesday, August 01, 2007
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Its pay back time. ;)

 



Ode to the Seduction Sisters


 


By H.J. Cruz


8/02/07


 


“Tis the search for passion that’s passionate,


 While its attainment languishes”


 


Tip your hats to the AD pussycats!


One frisky, one wild


One part clown, the other, uptown,


A song of rapture within each capture,


So do come near an tickle your ear,


For posie to make a heart Cheer!


Was that a babe I heard cry?


Nope, just a pussycat wetting a thigh!


 


Now Southern comfort is for sippin,


Thirsty formalities undoubtedly skippin,


Weaned on peppers as a wee child,


What we find hot, she calls mild,


Swatting at balls with fantasy claws,


Fillin yur seat with incredulous heat,


Buckling knees in eternal strip tease.


So bottoms up, lickity split,


A rat-a-tat-tat for tit.


C’mon over for jus one drink,


You’ll stagger away with portions to shrink.


Brave men who languish to long,


Will leave with “the grin”, in only a thong!


 


“Oh’ nippus erectus, come infectus!”


Caligula (well, maybe)


 


“And then came La Belle”


Pardon the pun ;-)


The minerva of metaphors


 


Amidst fountains of whey


Potent potions on IV’s drip,


White fields of lily betwixt lingerie,


Silky seductions of mortal sway,


Flirtatious symbiosis, adjectives bled,


Feline verbal might- men loosing sight,


Anointing flesh, a quivering mesh,


Prick a prodding with roses a thorny,


Scabbard o’ velvet vermillion steel,


Felicities soul a’stretcheth the maypole,


See her now in the twilight,


Weaving dream catchers dipped in delight!


 


Hast thou seeketh the gandereth,


Whilst thou temp a goose of gold?



 


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Reviewed by Kate Burnside 12/12/2007
So clever and very distracting... must be why I didn't remember to review this when reading it at the time, HJ! Fair bursts with oggling images and boggling diction. Pretty kitties left you feelin skitty, huh?! :)) Love, Kate xx
Reviewed by Mary Coe 11/30/2007
Very entertaining. You are so creative.
Reviewed by ~ Chanti 10/29/2007
Wow what a witty wordsmith you are <-- unintended alliteration.
A teasingly good write. Thanks for the smiles. :-) Seems the ladies have inspired you well.
Chanti
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten 9/29/2007
Gosh...now that some time has passed I wonder how Big she says it is now! LOL!
Too freakin' funny!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Reviewed by Michael G'Francisco 8/20/2007
CREATIVE, ENTERTAINING, ENJOYABLE AND OH SO POINTED.
Reviewed by Kathryn Collins 8/5/2007
H J --

The picture and caption do not say it all. not at all.

great,
Kathy
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 8/3/2007
Oh my how cute..Hugssssss
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 8/3/2007
HJ,
Gotta say you did us guys proud with this one
Good on ya mate....How big was that "uh...mouse?".....LOL

Walt
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 8/2/2007
Sisters!
Kewl, 'Awesome Thoughts displayed!
YOu got em back good!
Now!I'm sure, It's there turn AGAIN! :)
Warmly, Warrior Lady Purple Sheeeoox
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/2/2007
LOL, Cruz,

You paid 'em back with grace and style and a little catty humor: luv that pic. LOLOLOL! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Morning Star 8/2/2007
Awesome tribute to two very beautiful and talented poetess
They do write some staining sensual and romantic pieces,
love your intense description of some wonderful
Silky seductions and I love that La Belle would be an aristocat
And Southern Comfort would be an alley cat Just an awesome Ode
To seduction Beautiful write!!
Hugssss Love Peace and Joy to you always...Morning Star
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/2/2007
Its pay back time. ;)..

And you did that, very well! I love the graphic, too!
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 8/2/2007
This review should had said meow? can you guide me to the nippus erectus?
This poem shows some feminine claws.
Georg
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 8/2/2007
Oh My, I've had a lot of tributes gifted to me but never one quite like this H. Thou didst good, thou rougish tongue in cheek knave!! I loved it as much as Comfort did.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) 8/2/2007
Great poem, well writ. Victor
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 8/1/2007
Hey now, those are my soul sisters, H J, Quite an awesome poem you wrote here, I love your intense description of some wonderful pussycats!

Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by stan nassano 8/1/2007
well H.J you know your material,them both being hell cats,but oh so damn sexy.Where can i join their fan club.You had me laughing big words and all nice write to our friends,
thanks,
stan
Reviewed by Southern Comfort 8/1/2007
Oh Goober! What a little stinker you are! So LaBelle be an aristocat and Sc be an alley cat, both be damn delightful, so take that! PURRING ALONG, SWISHING MY TAIL SC
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