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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
8/7/2007 |
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OUCH! I felt this, that nightly sneak into my room, as the covers lifted off- for him to resume!
This touches deeply!
A gem I will savor, for the memories I have conquored!
WE must speak for the young, for the hope they need! and the miracle to keep believing!
GREAT poem Sweet Fee!
WArm hugs and Warmer Love,Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Tears in the Sun
Tears in the Soul! |
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| Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis |
8/6/2007 |
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The laws today are so lenient it is sad, to just give those monsters a slap on the wrist after they give their little victims a life time sentence. Put the...#?#*#?*#...in jail and throw away the key, let them rot. Touchy subject, deeply emotional write.
Love & hugs cuz
Selena |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
8/5/2007 |
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No there are no excuses.. and unfortunately the cycle continues unabated unless it is stopped. Powerful words here..
Myrna |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
8/4/2007 |
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A deeply emotive pen, how sad it is for the children.
Peace,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
8/3/2007 |
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The entire life of this child is ruined. Every waking day the awe of the child has been turned into a nightmare. I can't imagine it myself but I've sure heard the testimony from those whon lived it and you know what...any politician or star who is in the frontpage news are selfish and fools. The child who is robbed of innocense is where the news should be.
I'm sorry to spout off but you afforded this generous opportunity by being the sensitive poet that you are.
Love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
8/3/2007 |
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Fee,
This not only touches my heart it touches my very soul. Words in this review cannot express my how my heart feels reading this. I write alot on child abuse too, but this account thru a child's eyes doesn't touch mine. This reminds of my poem, Only the Shadows Heard Her Cry. Its remarkable, my friend. You have opened alot of eyes today. Yes, this MUST end.
Hugggs,
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
8/3/2007 |
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| Oh my,so sad..Hugssssss |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
8/3/2007 |
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| Don't know if it will ever stop yet it's great to hear others stand up for the children. Lady J |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
8/3/2007 |
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Very Heartbreaking and deeply felt
This is a very heart rendering write!
On child abused Yes Fee it must stop children
Should not have to go through this kind of pain
Your poem is very deep, honest
Many Hugsss love Peace and Joy to you always...Yolie
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
8/3/2007 |
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Fee i can't say what I want to be clear, 'cause they would boot me outta here.
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/3/2007 |
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Heartbreaking!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
8/3/2007 |
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A most earth shattering scenario that I believe happens on a daily basis. In my opinion individuals should not have children if they are not willing to secure their safety at anytime 24X7~PERIOD! I will work and try to help with this issue as long as I exist on this earth~IT MUST STOP!!
Your work here is something that needs to be said!!
Adults should be and at least try to be good examples in society which includes preciously tending to the babes!
It is up to us to KEEP THEM SAFE!!
Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/3/2007 |
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Heartbreaking; yes, it must end, and NOW!! God help us, and God help the innocent little children!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! < |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/3/2007 |
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It shouldn't hurt to be a child, but it does, it does: painfully penned horror. May it end soon--God help us.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons |
8/3/2007 |
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| Tragic. You put it in the right place. Horror--because it is. Hard to read about I know, but necessary. Silence keeps it going, perhaps speaking out long and loud enough will eventually bring an end to such horrors. Well done! Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
8/3/2007 |
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oh damn..my soul cries out for venegence..
Vesna:( |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/3/2007 |
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| Sad that this is happening every day. |
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| Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader) |
8/3/2007 |
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| Heartfelt words. Child abuse is a pandemic in our world. Stopping it is just as important as finding cures to disease. Well written, Fee. Lydi** |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
8/3/2007 |
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Oh Felix tyou bring tears to my eyes as I think of all the innocent little children that can't help themselves against these animals that hurt them in ways that they will never heal.
Love ya Cuz XOXO Rose |
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| Reviewed by Jennave Coz |
8/3/2007 |
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| Excruciating honesty, Tragic beauty...This is heartspeak, profound.Jen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
8/2/2007 |
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| important write here as so many do suffer-the last verse says it all so well |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
8/2/2007 |
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| Plain truth. I must be stopped. Pity such people can't be castrated. Victor |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
8/2/2007 |
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| Oh Sweetpea! You are such a beautiful carin man! We must all care, protect and love the Wee Ones! They are without rights and without a voice! HUGS! SC |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
8/2/2007 |
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A seconder to that!
There's the inhouse abused, and the outhouse, or should I say the slave trade industry rife as it is...that really rips me up.
Ty for this offering Leroy :)
( The Andy Griffith Show) never forgot that guy, he was hilarious...
So, that was just to lighten my mood after reading this sad sad, stinkin...Never mind, Shaddup Chezza
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
8/2/2007 |
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Oh Fee, such a heart wrenching poem..I understand...
Peace, love, and Light to all those tired and saddened children..
Amber "V" |
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