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Artsy Fartsy Poetry
by Southern Comfort
Friday, August 03, 2007
Rated "R" by the Author.
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When I gets a comment that gives me the Peedooles I bitch bout it!

Artsy Fartsy sho aint me,
I write what I feels and call it poetry,
Ifen Ya don't like my peaches don't shake my tree!
This be a peaceful place, this here den,
The poets care bout each other and call each other friend.
Each one of us is as special as we can be,
We have bonded with each other and have become family.
So don't be a smart ass and pick out what you deem we have done wrong,
Opinions are like asshole, everybody's got one, so ifen you don't like somethang, move along!
My poetry is my child, created by me Ya see,
So don't Ya dares calls my child ugly,
Or Buddy, you'll be on the fightin side of me!
I don't give a shit bout form or meter,
So what Ifen I don't knows a meter from a liter.
I am like Will Rogers, I write with common sense,
Folks seem to like my down home approach, I'll say in my defense.
So when roamin through the den, play nice on commenting or don't play,
Ifen Ya don't like the poet's poem, jest quietly move away,

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Reviewed by Dark Knight 10/6/2010
write how you feel-not how others want you to be
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/4/2007
I like this line
"Ifen Ya don't like my peaches don't shake my tree!


Say I too!!

Write your heart out sista!!

Thanks for the messages too...gotta love it!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 8/4/2007
Mr. Ed sait it and I will repeat it until someone jest quietly moves away.
Georg
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 8/4/2007
YOu got that right Sweet one!
Different strokes for DIFFERENT folks!
I love your expressions/and expressions from deep within in your heart! YOU tell em ALL!
A gem I will savor and treasure!
You spark my sparks when embers flow low!
and my mind is bewitched with all you see in your days! how you wrap it among words in poetry to display!
A book I do WANT to see, as many of your faithful followers will also believe!
WArm hugs and Much love, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox Love you!
Reviewed by Jennave Coz 8/3/2007
I couldn't agree more, Bravo to you! I come here to store my writings. And that is all I want to do WRITE ! I hope you are well.Jen
Reviewed by Ann Scarborough 8/3/2007
I am on your side SC, give em to me, I'll bury them in a fireant bed. And drizzle on some honey just for kicks. This person doesn't understand free flow poetry which is what we write. Meter shmeter, get a life and quit pretending to be a critic.

UGLY?!?!?!?!? Southern Comfort's poetry is anything but. Let's ride girls, we'll take 'em down.

Ann
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader) 8/3/2007
Fantastic, and justifiable stated, what was said in a comment to you and a few others was disrepectful, if SC wanted her crizism, SC would not be here, this is a peaceful, relaxing place, we all have our own stresses in the real world, and expressing words in fartsyland is a great joy, and relaxing, so go back to zombie land, I will be more than happy (((smile)))to excort you out of here along with others who adore SC. I stand by you SC in this writing and poetry is not all form constructive. I am well educated in all the forms...just because words are put to form does not mean the writting is going to be excellently told...and that includes all the well known Poets in the past...Keep writting sweet one, you know for a fact that everyone here LOVES YA and enjoys your work!!!! If this person needs to raz poets, she should go to a site that does so...if attacked because she thinks she is above all, then perhaps she should have gobs of poetry books, don't ya think? read some of my form writtings, they are not perfect, but what the F, I try just as all have...God Bless you SC, Love Ya...Peggy (Think I will copy this and make a story out of it...hehe...((((Hugs, SC))))
Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader) 8/3/2007
My daddy taught me to smile sweetly and say nothing if the words would not soothe. He was a smart man. This just goes to prove that you can take up residence in another country, but the natives will always be restless. People are the same everywhere...and sometimes that is not a good thing. Your venting poetry is wonderful, PA. Lydi**
Reviewed by Nicky Goodman 8/3/2007
I love your poem SC! I like how you have expressed this and it made me smile...still smiling - For my own poetry, i don't have the same opinion as you have expressed - this is because i am a bit artsy fartsy obviously!! and have been home grown on sites where the idea is to RESPECTfully and POSITIVEly offer suggestions and give crit, as well as to enjoy and have fun. Of course this goes wrong regularly, because people are idiots, rude, nasty, sly, ignorant, arrogant, sensitive, insensitive, oversensitive, and a whole heap of other wonderful qualities!! Some people don't want crit - of any kind -and that is totally cool with me, and to find a poem such as yours that still has me smiling and tells me exactly what you think, in such a wonderful way - is a joy, and pure poetry for me. i promise never to, okay? :o But i will say you got the rhythm going on in this one, your way with words and phrasing is totally SC original and brilliant, the rhymes are working it, and - it kicks ass!!! - well done SC, Nicky (of Fartsyland on the Green, United Kingdom of Rocks)xx
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante 8/3/2007
I have connections and a big gun.....you are a delight.
Reviewed by stan nassano 8/3/2007
I love it when Isee ya get all riled and hot and botherd SC
Oh i bet steam was rooling out yer ears when your wrote this one,
Thankyou fo ryour little lesson in poem review etiquette,if They start reviewing my spelling and typo's I'm doomed,(my good friend Dan has saved me at least once on spelling,thanks, Dan)
You be you SC your damn fine as you are,
stan
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/3/2007
Opinions are like assholes, everybody's got one, so ifen you don't like somethang, move along!

Go Get 'Em, SC, and Rawhide!!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/3/2007
I agree SC, but I guess it's called free speech and we can always delete.I usually ignore it,knowing we will always have those who don't like us,as well as those who do...

Eileen
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 8/3/2007
Me and La Belle can both flog 'em
Someone has always got to be an arse...
I love your style SC. I'm a 100% fer ya!
Hugs and bunches of them...
Reviewed by richard cederberg 8/3/2007
Love this ... you go gurl!

And I agree - if something constructive can't be shared in a review, or comment, then the disgruntled prick needs to take a long walk off a short pier.

Some people are just plumb mean! Could be jealousy too. Sadly it is so bloody easy to get away with indiscretions towards others (on the inter-net) that would never be attemped in person.

Blessings ...
Richard
Reviewed by Ted Bossis 8/3/2007
Dear young lady friend - Please don't allow nonsense to alter your sense - Unless you really want to - Then again you already know that -{never mind} -love *{ <Ted>}*
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 8/3/2007
Want me to flog 'em Sissy?

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