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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
8/15/2007 |
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| What a lovely storm. A joy to read. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
8/13/2007 |
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Wonderful choice of words to describe your undying love, very sensitively written, enjoyed....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/13/2007 |
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Well done, Rick, you build the tension up nicely. A perfect storm, indeed: batten down the hatches, gonna be a bumpy night!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by blue soplain |
8/13/2007 |
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concur with sandie, i kept hearing an acoustic note within the stanzas. .. love the analogy.....eyes like the sea after a storm./ . ..beautiful
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
8/13/2007 |
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This makes a nice song lyrics.
Sandie May Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/13/2007 |
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| Would make a nice song. |
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