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|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|What a lovely storm. A joy to read.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Wonderful choice of words to describe your undying love, very sensitively written, enjoyed....
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Well done, Rick, you build the tension up nicely. A perfect storm, indeed: batten down the hatches, gonna be a bumpy night!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by blue soplain
|concur with sandie, i kept hearing an acoustic note within the stanzas. .. love the analogy.....eyes like the sea after a storm./ . ..beautiful
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|This makes a nice song lyrics.
Sandie May Angel :o)
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Would make a nice song.|