|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
That is togetherness in action facing the age of times...
"Lay me down" sings to the union of spirit and the spirit of unity with the voice that never grows old.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is a superb poem which I'm glad I got the chance to read! Thank you for sharing!
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|Very original love poem, I love the "cycle of nature" projecting your physical lives together into the next spiritual birth. LIke the sweetness of fallen apples, decaying into new life beneath the eternal apple tree of life. You might like my poem "Intitials Carved in Love" written for my dearly departed parents.
|Reviewed by Samuel Stone
|A very beautiful and powerful poem.. Enjoyed the read... Wishing you well...Sam|
|Reviewed by William Heffner
|Well done, thanks for sharing. God Bless You and Your Fruitful, Inspiring Husband.
If you get time read "My Rainbow's End" inspired by my wonderful wife.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
What a beautiful thought to be able to connect so perfectly with each other, even in death. Roots that are eternal will surely run deep. Thank You also for commenting on my poem. Blessings to You Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by Afrika Abney
|What an awesome write! Thank you for sharing this piece with us!|
|Reviewed by S. Thompson
|This is a beautiful poem. The pear tree and the clinging roots...paints a beautiful picture and feelings of LOVE--very powerful.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Beautifully meaningful verses, Bernice. Thank you for sharing them. Welcome to AD. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|Beautiful Bernice...I am reminded of the movie The Notebook...you need a box of tissues to watch it. Yet I found my tears not of sadness but of joy.
|Reviewed by Gloria Gay
|Beautiful, lyrical, musical.|
|Reviewed by Vernelle Edwards
|Wow! "Lay me Down" is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. It speaks of eternity, the afterlife, and everlasting one love.|
|Reviewed by April Smith
|How beautiful you paint life after death (after life?). I enjoyed this poem! April|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Absolutely a beautiful poetic piece
Peace be with you
|Reviewed by M. Kenneth Coleman (Reader)
|You've painted a beautiful picture of eternal love. Fruits in life, fruits in death. What a romantic idea.|
|Reviewed by Mary Coe
|Well penned. I enjoyed the read.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|When in bloom, singing bees will visit <--- Buzzy, buzzy, buzzy bee,
Buzzing round from tree to tree.
Buzzy, buzzy, buzzy bee.. lol Sorry...
Deep spiro write, love the metaphors and visuals this paints...
Death where is thy sting (no pun about bees) this brings to mind..
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Beautiful, very beautiful and talented!!!!!!!!! Your words are from my heart!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Very beautifully written your words come to life
Your words have captured a stunning view of your
Excellent tone and flow
Love Peace and Hugsss....Morning Star
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Your choice of the metaphor 'pear tree' - having its sweet gritty textured juicy fruit - is satisfying in light of the strong evidence of your unwavering faith in Jesus Christ woven deliciously throughout your thoughts.
'For me to live is Christ, but to die is gain' is, to me, the marvelous light that permeates this write. Well done!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|The poems were good, some very much so, but I have a bit of trouble with the posting of more than one at a time . . .|
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Very nice...each has a distinct flow of thought...very enjoyable work of poetic expression.....