by Southern Comfort
Friday, September 07, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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What are we doing? One of us should just leave and let the other grieve.
Once again you have made me cry,
Why can't I wise up and tell you good-bye?
What do you really want from me?
Please find out or just leave me be!
I fell in love with you quite by accident,
You were my first attempt at love and I didn't know what love meant.
So far loving you means tears and pain,
Why I am still in love with you, is a mystery I can't explain.
I never classed myself as a fool, too dumb to learn,
But like a mindless month I jump in your flame and burn.
Why do we cling together when we should leave,
Parting from you feels like a death and makes me grieve.
One of us should be strong and just disappear,
But Lover's Gravity's pull keeps us here.
We both have other routes we can take,
One of us should go, for the other's sake.
I know we should definitely part,
But it will be hard for me to survive, because you own my heart!
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|Reviewed by Silent Dream
|Sounds quite painful. Especially when all that comes to mind is the tears. A heartfelt piece.
Thinking of you and sending ((LOve and Hugs))
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Another sadie one, but always written excellently..
Kissin and huggin and lovin
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
No one can own anything of another's unless granted permission. Take your heart back, return to sender, and leap off that mountain of fear!
Be brave and do what is best for your own spirit, dear lady.
Peace, Love, and Light,
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Oh SC Love is blind and it is hard for us to see ahead of hurt and pain but Happiness do ly ahead, if we just focus on it. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very emotional write...one I can feel within ever fiber of me body!!
Gotta love what Georg said.those bloody onions got to me eyes too with this one!!
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|What I am for you, an open onion in yore eyes? you cryin' a lot and ain't doin' nuthin' to get the water runnin'
|Reviewed by Jennave Coz
|Tragic beauty twice combined,Love's growing pains so well defined.I hope you are well.Jen|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Too many living this: I pray this isn't your reality. If it is, get out before it's too late...................poignantly penned heartbreak.
(((((HUGS))))) and love, Little Stormie
|Reviewed by jude forese
|deeply moving sentiments, SC ...|
|Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk
|Time to brake away from and find another replace,someone to pick you up and put a smile on your face forever more...Hugs and Love, Peggy|
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|Oh, this is heartfelt sad. Hope you are well.
Sandie May Angel :o(
|Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
|Oh Sissy, I have lived this so many times. Heartfelt write!
|Reviewed by stan nassano
|another heartfelt write,SC,life is a struggle,i hope things work out for you ...peace ,love and happiness to you,you deserve them all and more,
|Reviewed by Ted Bossis
|Sensitive lovers <>Time & Tides <>Flowing & glowing <>Moment by moment -love * Ted|