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| Reviewed by Leslie Bond |
8/27/2009 |
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| I felt like I was sitting on the sea shore in this write. Good One! Leslie |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
9/11/2007 |
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excelent visuals of a sailor's life and death, William.
Sitting on the shore
wishing to be on the sea once more.
I really liked this one...ye salty dog.
Now, put Willie on your headphones and ride your "Hog."...LOL
Walt
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/9/2007 |
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Another very eloquent and beautifully written poem William!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/9/2007 |
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| exceptionally well written and moving poem ... |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
9/9/2007 |
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...the sea will always embrace...for many treausures has she...even in silence.
John |
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| Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk |
9/8/2007 |
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| Fabulous write William...Hugs, Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
9/8/2007 |
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This is a stunning offering, William, though a bit sad. I do believe that anyone who has spent any time upon the sea, feels a bond with her and even in death, will leave a piece of their soul to rest with her forevermore. Wonderful pen!
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
9/8/2007 |
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I smell the ocean and her magnifiscent sprays of mist that are refreshing to my flesh. It is life for me and your words are like her voice with each ebb and flow.
Outstanding.
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
9/8/2007 |
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Awesome if I where man I would love to be a sailor!
William this is beautifully written and expressed thoughts
Creative choice of words which
provide your reader with great imagery
Enjoyed reading very much!!!
Love Peace and hugsss to you...Yolie |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
9/8/2007 |
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Wow William, as my family has many life long sailors I have ofter heard them say the ocean speaks to them as she calls from far away. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
9/8/2007 |
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The sea will always beckon to many who love its life and secrets.
George |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
9/8/2007 |
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There I shall remain
Till judgment day
When she, the sea
Will give up all her dead
Sounds like my father. . .Captain John. The sea is an attraction to those who've known her
This sings with devotion!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
9/8/2007 |
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| Just beautiful writing sweet man,have a wonderful weekend...Hugssss |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/8/2007 |
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| Old Sailors never die, their spirit always remains with the Sea. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
9/8/2007 |
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| Sailor Bill. This is quite some write. I love starring out to sea, i can relate to you thoughts... |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
9/8/2007 |
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| A fabulous poem William, blessings, Holly |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/8/2007 |
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Wow-wow-wow...love it...oh how the ocean speaks to me in this magnificent offering...I need to go to my beach right this moment....my heart totally touche with this write my friend!!
Thanks for sharing!!
love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
9/8/2007 |
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A french bucaneer couldn't had said that with more feelings, looking at his sails and the odd seagull raiding on a thermal, but...
I don't think the seas will give up its dead sailors ever, or its waters will miss the life's salt.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
9/8/2007 |
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| Wonderful writing William. You brought me there, sat me upon the deck and made me feel the spray, hear the cries and see her massive body cover her take. Ah, the sea. . she be a scary lady. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
9/7/2007 |
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William, the is absolutely stunning! I can feel and see the images in my mind. You know how much I love the sea. Wonderful poetry!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
9/7/2007 |
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A Sailor's Dream
The ship and me
For all eternity.
I'd guess that anyone who has ever been a sailor and loved it feels that way. I've talked to a few, and the lure of the sea pulls strongly.
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/7/2007 |
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O, William -
Speechless - awesome poetry - thank you --
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
KEEPER!!!!!! |
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