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| Reviewed by Chuck Keller |
9/14/2007 |
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| Romantic and passionate. Good job. |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
9/14/2007 |
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| I could see a poetry reading on stage , red curtain behind the reader, candles the only light. The shadows move to and fro on the crimson curtain and these words are whispered in a silent room. GREAT visual this one gives!!! |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
9/13/2007 |
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Your wit shines through here, Eileen...you couldn't quite resist spicing up this romantic, idyllic poem -- much to the delight of your readers.
A well done treat!
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
9/13/2007 |
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| Indeed. When two become one. That is Gods gift, or the devils fatal trap if used unwisely..LOL Ed using Peter Sellers ole joke... |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
9/13/2007 |
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| Eileen, a beautiful romantic writing...caused this reader to be inspired much! |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
9/13/2007 |
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| so beautiful... like my dream last night. a poem clearly inspired by such a paradise. Dawn |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/13/2007 |
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A beautiful poem Eileen!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/13/2007 |
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I became filled with his happenis
WOW! |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
9/13/2007 |
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| Beautiful writing sweet lady..enjoy your day...Hugssss |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
9/13/2007 |
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Wow Eileen there was quite an explosion here in your words, Beautiful write. Thank you.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
9/13/2007 |
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Eileen,
Passion explodes in your verses. Bless You My Friend. |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
9/12/2007 |
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A harmonious duet...percussion of the heart...and music of romance in the write.
enjoyed...
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
9/12/2007 |
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Nice picture! Two hearts beating as one, so enraptured, so in love, a true "paradise".......
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
9/12/2007 |
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Calibrated in synch with every sense known to us passionate creatures - sight, taste, touch, and sound...shouldn't all of these senses be present, though, when we consummate romance? Paradise reaches zenith, Eileen...
Love,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
9/12/2007 |
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| Sweet romance. Nicely done. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/12/2007 |
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HULlo, Eileen, there went me monitor (and me glasses). Holy smokes, you set the Den aBLAZE!!!! Nothing ugly about it: natural. Honest. Beautiful love, blessed by God. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
9/12/2007 |
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| Now this is a real dance of romantic love. Enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Helen Downey |
9/12/2007 |
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This is just beautiful. I also liked the music that accompanied it.
You really have a way with words. Thanks for a double treat. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
9/12/2007 |
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Dang, Eileen, you wrote a hot little number here! WHOO HOO!! Well done; I thinks I need a cold shower....Very well done; brava! Love the graphic; pretty!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
9/12/2007 |
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| Damn cool word...(sorry I have not written of late, commenting wise, but 7 day work weeks and 12 hour days make it really hard to come home to much more than to eat, walk Rufuz and go to bed, again) Ed |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
9/12/2007 |
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Beautiful and romantic Eileen
Love
William |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
9/12/2007 |
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| So romantic my dear! love Holly |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
9/12/2007 |
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| I became filled with his happenis That's not a misspelled word. The art is intriguing.He He |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
9/12/2007 |
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Mimosa scented moonlight is so exotic...and tres erotic. beautiful and passionate Sis as only you can pen.
Love,
Ssuan |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
9/12/2007 |
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Truly romantic. I like the play on 'happenis' - didn't even have to re-read, caught it the first time. Reaching paradise - isn't that where we all want to be?
Reaching,
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
9/12/2007 |
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| THAT was one exotic and lovely poem from my friend . . . Very good . . . |
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| Reviewed by Stan Grimes |
9/12/2007 |
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| What a nice place to be. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
9/12/2007 |
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Between you and Amor, it has been a passionate day. This is lovely, Eileen. Every line a gem.
Love,
Bette |
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