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| Reviewed by Vid Guez |
2/2/2010 |
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| I like the way this flows. Can one lie to one's self? Lying can be a vice or a vise, depending on one's level of expertise. |
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| Reviewed by Ava Stewart |
1/13/2010 |
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| I love your passion for the written word, I can commiserate with your frustration! Best wishes always, Ava |
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| Reviewed by Chessly Nesci |
12/14/2009 |
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| This is excellent! You are so right! Liar's never feel the pain, because they don't care if they hurt another. Take care,~ Chessly |
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| Reviewed by Joel Sattler |
12/9/2009 |
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I am a liar.
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| Reviewed by Marguerite Little Flower |
10/30/2009 |
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| You bend the facts for your own gain. How is it you feel no pain/ There's so much truth in this statement that is so about our society today. What could we do to change it? Living the truth ourselves as Jesus did. It can hurt to be a truthful person but for the long haul it will pay off. Honesty is still the best policy. lil flower |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/3/2009 |
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| Nero is fiddlin' . . . |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
7/1/2009 |
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Fool me once shame on you.
Fool me twice shame on me.
But with "the few" on the rise
And "the many" in decline
Your timely liar warning
Comes just in time.
Love the poem. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/30/2009 |
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An awesome piece
very creative
Peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
6/19/2009 |
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| Powerful and well written! |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Henry |
4/30/2009 |
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Michael,
This poem is quite true,and more often than not,a lie about a particular matter is heard many times before the truth of the matter comes out.
Much success
Barbara Henry |
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| Reviewed by Vasu Ramanujam |
4/15/2009 |
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Mike,
You are the master wordsmith! Good one!!
Vasu |
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| Reviewed by Carol Surber |
4/13/2009 |
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Fanbulous! I would have not picked out the word "LIAR" If you had not pointed out how to see it!
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| Reviewed by POETESS Of The Soul - SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing in PURPLE Passions_ |
4/10/2009 |
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WOW! I saw it... Such Shadows "hide" so much!
This is MAGNIFICENT! Glad you found it!
and wanted to share it Mike!
Yea, or like vacuum cleaners salesman and sometimes insurance agents too!CLEVER POEM of Liars, I can't stand em' - Trying to make us feel stupid and foolish! Another day I say...
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings of Love and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
P.S. and they put their head on a pillow at night, too... Like us all...
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
3/20/2009 |
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Interesting write I have found tonight :) But you know what they say, No Brain, No Pain!!
Cheers
Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
2/13/2009 |
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The words come out but do not say, the truth behind what you portray...
Many lives and reputations have been ruined by just this.
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
2/11/2009 |
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Excellent poem,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
2/6/2009 |
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| Very goo. I've read somewhere that humans are the only animal who can lie to itself and believe it thoroughly. Spot on. Cheers, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Jack Kuperman |
2/4/2009 |
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| Noce words stream |
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| Reviewed by Stan Law |
1/19/2009 |
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Very clever, poetic, instructive, innovative.
I’m impressed, Stan
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| Reviewed by Frank Whyte |
1/16/2009 |
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Mike:
This is top-notch work! Loved it!
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| Reviewed by WENDY JENNINGS |
1/11/2009 |
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| michael, love your poem, others feel the pain of those liars!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
11/7/2008 |
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| Wonderful poem. I have no use for a liar. Lie to me once and it's adieu. Liars get so use to their game that most of the time they believe themselves. So sad for the unwary victims. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
10/4/2008 |
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| Excellent writing indeed...Hugssssss |
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| Reviewed by Manes Pierre, Ph.D. |
9/11/2008 |
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| Very powerful! Keep expressing yourself! |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
10/4/2007 |
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Very much Truth in this poem, Michael...coming from a man of integrity yourself, this poem looks really good on this page...an honest representation. Thank you for this...be well always, Michael...Blessed Be.
Love,
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
10/1/2007 |
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Liars are in the same category as abusers, I think. And I have no patience for either.
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/1/2007 |
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Hard reality of so many two-faced bastards!!
Thank you for sharing....picture perfect!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
9/30/2007 |
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| Excellent poem, I hate liars!!! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/30/2007 |
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Perfection! Michael I love how you portray the liar, yet show that in the end, it all results in failure, for we can only be fooled for a time before we learn the truth.
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
9/30/2007 |
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| well written-i think there are some who are such liars they no longer know what the truth is |
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