Join Free! | Login    
   Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!


Featured Authors:  Scott Boyd, iAmy Sellers, iPeter Oszmann, iStacey Chillemi, iKellee Stone, iDavid Litwack, iOralya Ueberroth, i

  Home > Health/Wellness > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

· + Follow Me
· Contact Me
· Sponsor Me!
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 3,370 Titles
· 56,991 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
Member Since: Dec, 2001

Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.

Featured Book
Inspirational Haiku for a Recessed Economy
by Eric Knapp

A book of haiku To help you forget the loss Of all your savings..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members

No Grip
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Thursday, October 11, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow
Recent poems by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
•  Past Due, 2014, Karla Dorman
•  So THERE, 2014, Karla Dorman
•  Hold On: Spring Is Coming, 2014, Karla Dorman
•  THEY, 2013, Karla Dorman
•  The Death of Autumn, 2013, Karla Dorman
           >> View all 3,280

Not my current state, just my Muse wanting to express herself ...

Depression:  the long blue
slide down uncaring walls
into the shadows, where
I've grown accustomed to
the darkness - no one can
see the tears on my face ...

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (10/11)


Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!

Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
We must fight hiding tears. We need them to be seen. Cheers
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
A powerful write indeed...well expressed my friend! Bravo!
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
powerful emotions are expressed here-have been there too and am sure most can relate
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
It's called the blues for a reason. It comes and we collapse. Pull out!
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
Dear Karla,

Your poem is a good expression of what being depressed feels like. Glad to hear that you're not in that place right now.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Love That Picture Karla
get home sick for my Catskill Mountains
specially at this time of the year,
when the Mountain turn into a kaleidoscope
Of beautiful hues
enjoyed your Well Penned write.

Peace and love be with you
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Beautifully written glad it is not how you feel.
Great picture
love and peace, Carole~
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Singing the Blues,,,, that eery yet peacful tone, where only you can feel your feelings.
Take care always,, Christine
Reviewed by larry linville
so greatly expressed and the photo is so beautiful

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Take you Muse out for some ice cream - it always helps with blue tears.

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)
WOW (woman of words)I too am glad this isn't your present state of mind but oh so descriptive of the feelings of kindred souls. PLB&G, luvya <Mikii>
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Although glad this isn't your state of mind I know that it is part of your soul and many of us poets feel this way from time to time. Great capture regardless.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Blue tears? having you a smoke with our Rufuz's Ed?
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Very glad to hear it's not your current state, Karla, and I like that picture.
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Here's one for ya Karla.

Standing here 'tween sand and surf,
I'm as blue as a ...Smurf.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Depression: not a fun place to be; glad you aren't there. Just keep on smiling and hoping that things will turn around; that's what I try to do (although there are THOSE days where I wonder about that...)! Very well written, Karla; and I LOVE the picture; spectacular! Captures the "blueness" of depression perfectly! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Love the differently colored fonts; neat! :)
Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Don't be blue Karla. Depression will pass, and we love you and enjoy your wonderful words and pictures. Keep them coming...Hugs...Joyce
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Depression is a slippery slope I am glad this is not your current state
God Bless
Popular Poetry (Health/Wellness)
  1.  Father's Day Prayer
  2.  Healthy Living
  3.  Stones
  4.  The Patient
  5.  If I am whining again, please excuse me...
  6.  Fun weekend...
  7.  My counselor
  8.  Mental Acuity
  9.  Sleepless in New Jersey...
  10.  Dare to Dream

broken glass and all by al squitieri,sr

When modern medicine declared the author's autoimmune disease hopeless, the Great Physician proved otherwise...  
BookAds by Silver, Gold and Platinum Members

Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us

Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.