Passionate Journey's Flight ( A collaboration)
by Amber V Moonstone
Friday, October 12, 2007
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Another collaboration with my dear friend William!
Passionate Journey's Flight
by Amber "V" Moonstone
One time you had the love of your life,
now you stand alone, without passion.
Why not break through the night,
Come to my bed of unfulfilled lust,
to bring passion back to your soul.
The moments of unity are ascending,
You are beginning to feel my vibrations,
To know that you belong with me,
soothing my body's cravings
for your sweet passionate embrace
and your climatic erupting fire.
You are my life,
You brighten my every day,
You enhance each dream,
You deliver passion to the extreme.
You must begin the journey,
fly to me, my love.
Never before have we known
more deliverance from the darkened night
but to be in each others arms.
It is only a fleeting moment away
that passionate journey's flight.
The chains of loyalty once forged
A burden upon my passion
Where my love was true
Now I find myself alone
During cold nights, thinking and desiring you.
My soul wishes no longer
The coldness of loneliness
Within the sanctuary of your embrace
Awaits me like a widow’s web
Imprison me eternally.
I find myself traveling a lonesome journey
Where at the rainbow’s end
Is the pedestal of your passionate bed
My uninhibited passion will fulfill
Your dreams and fantasies
There love will spill.
I’ve forgotten the taste of milk and honey
That laces the sweetest of lushes lips
Take my hand walk me through
Your most desired dreams
Within your thoughts
Enslave in your passion this night.
Allow our tangled souls
To dance with the shadows on the walls
The night is ours
As our journey into ecstasy
Begins erupting like a dormant volcano
Bodies tingling, disintegrating like bursting novas
The eastern horizon is aglow
As a new day, steals the night away.
By: Amber “V” Moonstone &
William Bonilla (D’Artagnan)
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|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|William and Amber (Viv)
I love the closeness of your hearts and souls in these endearing words you bestow!
Romantic feelings is only part of it! WOW!
Amazing and Thank you for sharing!
WArmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Wow absolutely beautiful!
I love how your thoughts come together
So well as if you were there writing
Next to each other!
Outstanding collaboration on this
Very passionate and unique piece!!
Love Peace and hugssss...Morning Star
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
I am once again honored to have collaborated with you
as our thoughts intermingle to compose another enjoyable write
For our readers, as creative writers we have accomplished what we set out to create......a believable Romantic Poetic offering
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Another explosive passionate poem that is a joy to read and feel! Beautiful work from you both!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|quite a beautiful, romantic collaboration ...|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|How can we be sure that this is only a poetry collaboration? It seems like a collaboration of two passionately in love, with tender caresses in their minds and letting us to take just a little peak.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|This is so beautiful and soothing to the heart and soul. The two of you write and blend so well together....
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Tonight...romance buds and two poets make passion desirable for all.
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|wow...the more you both write together the more I feel you two if not future soulmates then you are poetic soulmates-passionate-well done you two!!|
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|I gotta' agree with Belle. You two are indeed a passtionate duo, and your "voice" is getting more vibrant.
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|This is fantastic!!! Wow, what a beautiful romantic writing. You two should try to write a romantic/mystery book together. There's lots of alluring lines and material to cause the mind to have all sorts of imaginations...and that's good!|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|You two, Amber and B'Artagnan, make beautiful poetry together; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Your two romantic and poetic souls dance very well together on this page.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Oh you two just get better and better the freedom of expression is growing. Wondreful poem of passion.|