|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|It's a feast for its brevity.
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|good write. 'kiss awake' is super. cheers|
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Exquisite! Dreams, reality ~ longing.
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Saweet, "Then kiss awake my eyes"
Only to close them again in extacy.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Most captivating, Susan, as is the Venice picture.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|your romantic soul always strives to achieve it dreams ... delightful thoughts, Susan ...|
|Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
|Someday this perfect love shall be fulfilled. This is Beautiful, I'm so in awe of the way you can express the exact feelings in your heart, I can allways feel you through your words. Love, Pierre.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Beautifully penned longing, Susan, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|very passioate and soothing|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Beautiful romantic poetry.|
|Reviewed by William Cryer
|I like this tender piece. It murmurs, rather than shrieks; it lulls the heart.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|The sweetness of a kiss cannot be described, until it turns into passion spent . . . Gotta love it . . .|
|Reviewed by Ted Bossis
|Sweetness of kissing day or night ~love Ted|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|A well written version of, "May I," but who is it doing the asking?
I like the multi-faceted spread of this. Good work! - Bill
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|To be awakened by kisses, that take away burns,, comforting poem.
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|nicely done Lady J|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Beautifully written Susan. Absolutely superb.|