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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/14/2007 |
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It's a feast for its brevity.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
10/13/2007 |
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| good write. 'kiss awake' is super. cheers |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
10/13/2007 |
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Exquisite! Dreams, reality ~ longing.
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
10/13/2007 |
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Saweet, "Then kiss awake my eyes"
Only to close them again in extacy.
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/13/2007 |
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| Most captivating, Susan, as is the Venice picture. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/13/2007 |
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| your romantic soul always strives to achieve it dreams ... delightful thoughts, Susan ... |
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| Reviewed by Pierre Ortega |
10/12/2007 |
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| Someday this perfect love shall be fulfilled. This is Beautiful, I'm so in awe of the way you can express the exact feelings in your heart, I can allways feel you through your words. Love, Pierre. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/12/2007 |
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Beautifully penned longing, Susan, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/12/2007 |
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| very passioate and soothing |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/12/2007 |
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| Beautiful romantic poetry. |
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| Reviewed by William Cryer |
10/12/2007 |
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| I like this tender piece. It murmurs, rather than shrieks; it lulls the heart. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
10/12/2007 |
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| The sweetness of a kiss cannot be described, until it turns into passion spent . . . Gotta love it . . . |
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
10/12/2007 |
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| Sweetness of kissing day or night ~love Ted |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
10/12/2007 |
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A well written version of, "May I," but who is it doing the asking?
I like the multi-faceted spread of this. Good work! - Bill |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/12/2007 |
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To be awakened by kisses, that take away burns,, comforting poem.
Christine |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
10/12/2007 |
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| nicely done Lady J |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
10/12/2007 |
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| Beautifully written Susan. Absolutely superb. |
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