|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Saberi, you are able to write with the beauty of words entangled in the intimacy of pain and joy simultaneous. The fabric of romance unfolds in the artistry of your heart.|
|Reviewed by Monica Martin
|A beautiful work!|
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|What a beautiful ode to loves design.|
|Reviewed by R Beeman
|very well thought out write. a touch of wit and sarcasm blended with such deep passion and desire. brought together "on the shaken bridge unfolding time " i love the last line. to unfold time would be a powerful thing.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|this poem explores both side of love and passion, flesh and spirit ... it is a self-explanatory query into the temporary balance and shaky foundation they force onto our willing beings ...
i like the uniqueness of imagery and the amalgamation of sarcasm and desire ...
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Some real memorable lines in this one Saberi ...
"the crumpled sheets of our unpoised fecundities"
"we etch our souls on stones of silenced emotions"
Very soul-searching, mildly cynical; the afterglow you have created in this is intoxicating. Well done!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Quite a mind-stiring poem with questions asked without really needing an answer . . . Angst-influenced is the biting scarcasm and reality is the base from which it came . . . Exceptionally well done . . .|