|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
well done, indeed.
|Reviewed by John Domino
|All too true - sometimes we need to follow our senses.|
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Reviewed by Jerelyn Craden
|No mistake in writing this Haiku, my friend. It's stellar!|
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|It's so hard to determine what is/isn't a mistake I think. So much packed into these few lines. Cheers|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Crystal clear words of wisdom shared....
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Cool Ku' with much wisdom,
|Reviewed by Frances Lynn
|Intriguing. Sounds like pearls of wisdom from the iChing! More please!|
|Reviewed by blue soplain
|something in this reminds me of Rumi, and very few things do that; i admire how you left the ending open. .. would it be folly then to follow through KNOWIng, understanding, the clarity of said mistake? youve left it to the reader to form more than just a simple view. .. we do indeed learn more readily from our mistakes than our victories. ..wisdom gained. ...
a succinct little gem~
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|OK,sounds so good to me...Great writing as always sweet man..Hugsssssss|