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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
10/23/2007 |
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We are not alone in this universe and we'd just better watch out.
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
10/23/2007 |
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| Eileen, this is profound & prolific from beginning to end...don't know if man will ever be able to live peace, there are two many who want to rule and lead. This is a great poem. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
10/23/2007 |
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Very true words you write for us today Eileen, I do believe that man is slowly destroying our earth and it is a shame. Thank you.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/22/2007 |
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| a sobring write-so much to ponder. A wonderful write |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
10/22/2007 |
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| E.T. absolutely breathtaking in it's totallity, so rich in elegant truth and prose, You had me wrapped up from beginning to end. You certainly hit home with all that rich beauty we are about to destroy,and our life along with theirs, the arrogance of men is overwhelming, you said it so well! My heart is with you!Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/22/2007 |
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i believe we are living in times when civilization is coming to terms with his own inherent nature in order to evolve and develop ... unfortunately much turmoil and heartache will prevail as it gives birth to itself again ...
interesting and nicely formulated poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Larson |
10/22/2007 |
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It made me think that we are the insects and that the world will keep on turning long after we are gone. Also made me think that in the grander scheme, wars need to be fought, or the oppressed shall never taste freedom. Great write.
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
10/22/2007 |
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Man is so distant from their reality games that it's explosive and we are the fodder for their toys.
Beautiful poetry with wise words for all mankind.
Love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/22/2007 |
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| Jerry this isn't about any one war or political party, it's about humanities inability to find the proper perspective on how to live in peace,and it is true that insects that carry diseases are more likely to destroy us than we are them.That may sound far fetched to many, but it has been documented...If you think the leaders of this world are doing a good job then you and I have different perspectives. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/22/2007 |
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Behold, there shall be a new Heaven and a new Earth...I don't exactly remember where it is in the Bible, but it's there...will our planet we call home be destroyed by us or by God? Hard to say: we're doing a bang up job of it already. Won't take much for God to finish the job. Thought provoking excellence, well done, Eileen!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
10/22/2007 |
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| I wouldn't call what is happening these days "virtual reality games," Eileen, and I doubt the poor bastards over there would call it that either. I understand where you are coming from . . . Just question the method you used to get there . . . First of all I doubt man is capable of destroying the world. I do believe that is a job left up to someone with a higher power . . . |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/22/2007 |
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| A clarion call for all to heed but few ever do. |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
10/22/2007 |
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As we continue to evolve, humanity finds many of God's creations truly problematic. Yet, for soooo many years, they have balanced what God intended for earth. Now, people find them to be pests and want them destroyed. Who/what is next? You? Me?
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Ann Scarborough |
10/22/2007 |
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I have to agree with Dan, Eileen. A wonderful, truthful write! Man must destroy what he cannot possess.
Love,
annie |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
10/22/2007 |
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Eileen, great write filled with so many truths.
Peace,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci |
10/22/2007 |
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So well put
where has the beauty of the butterfly gone
Man has all but destroyed all that is beautiful |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
10/22/2007 |
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Wooooow what a fibulae poem!!
I read it twice its very true every word!!
Your words captured such beautiful imagery and
The tone here was great!!
Excellent write of the ET
Enjoyed very much!!
Love Peace and hugssss...Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/22/2007 |
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Meanwhile on earth~ man in all of his brilliance ~ continues in ignorance as it wars against itself destroying everything in its path
We truly are very ignorant, and I truly believe we will soon pay a horrible price for it. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
10/22/2007 |
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| WOW - Fantastic write ET. And all too true. God bless you lady. ;~) |
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