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| Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine |
10/29/2007 |
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| Pensive. R |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
10/28/2007 |
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| really good write, fee, Lady J |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
10/26/2007 |
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...some of us have walked this walk and thought these thoughts, wondering what if
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
10/26/2007 |
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Memories of a long ago love - melancholy, but every so sentimental and beautiful.
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/26/2007 |
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Like a wet piece of wood, once part of a hull that traveled on the seven seas of laugh and tears and now find itself thrown and forgotten on a unknown rocky beach.
Fee, sure you haven't got salty sea water in your veins?
Great!
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
10/25/2007 |
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Something about the Sea lately!
Nice sentiments here Fee, overtones of deep longing and lonliness, which one can relate too.
:) Cherrypie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/25/2007 |
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| a serene and lonely feel to this write-i loce the driftwood day desk-be well-karen |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/25/2007 |
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| Fee, this Simply has a Solitude to it,, Soothing, and Sad, as well as Beauty ,,,, Christine |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
10/25/2007 |
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| Oh myyyyy,this is so very beautiful sweet man,great writing...HUgsssss |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
10/25/2007 |
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Ohhhh sad! It's a heartbeat extraordinary when a poet can relate the deep sadness of love as you have here. The ocean does it to me too. I've often wondered why the attraction to the tide...is it the ebb and flow, like the heart or the saline taste like our tears?
Love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Ann Scarborough |
10/25/2007 |
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This is beautiful and sad, Fee. A stormy day on the shore brings these thoughts to my mind.
Love,
annie |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
10/25/2007 |
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Felix another beautifuly written poem with so much in each line. I almost felt tears as I read it, can't quite figure out why but it touched me. Thank you for sharing.
Love ya Cuz XOXO, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
10/25/2007 |
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| Lost love -each wave just a fading snap shot, drifting in and out just like my tears--these lines brings back a memory of lost love, that we all never forget--very heartwarming and sad, but a lovely write for sure. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/25/2007 |
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Poignant yet beautiful write, Fee; very well penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/25/2007 |
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| The seashore is truly a place for reflections of love, and this is truly a sad lament, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
10/25/2007 |
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| Fee this is just lovely, beautiful images and sentiments. |
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