Pain, The Reward For Softness
by Southern Comfort
Tuesday, October 30, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I come to you with arms open and the trust of a child, you reward my softness with pain.
My aqua, blue eyes are welled with tears, that spill over, hitting the ground,
My tears are your reward, your winning crown.
You smile, the victor has won the spoils,
My pain and humilation are the reward for your toil.
You revel in my quivering chin and trembling lips,
My tears signal victory as you hold me in cruelty's grip.
My crime, I wanted love and deep devotion,
I wanted to give you my love, it is deeper than the deepest ocean.
You have called me a silly heart, a romantic fool,
You find me childlike and so unschooled.
My feelings for you scare me, they are so strange and new to me,
Why must you always hurt me, I love you, just open your eyes and see!
Music: Cry Me A River
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|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Be happy again!
I know these feelings too well,with my EX, glad he's gone, a happier ME is I, and you will be too, as you think of you.
YOur words express so much SC
WArmly, Warrior Gypsy Lady Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by Carolyn Wilson
|Very honest. I easily sense your pain and humilation, and my heart breaks for you. I applaud your ability to be transparent and vulnerable, and to put accurately into words what most of us have at some point felt, and sadly it's that vulnerability that cruel men feed on. Thankfully you recognize it, and hopefully you have embraced and claimed your softness, and have grown to love yourself enough to have moved on. Love and best wishes|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Nice and sad Sc..
Love ya much!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Sad theme, SC. I wish I could take your pain away. Take charge and take care. Love and hugs from B.C., Canada,
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|It Is really time to get out..Pain is not a good thing. I know this all too well..Just like Kathy, that was my first marriage, now I am happy, even though I am not in a relationship, it is a very beautiful time in my life. It is "Vee" time!! Embrace your beautiful soul and spirit, and fly SC, fly.
Peace, Love, and Light,
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Sounds like a tribute to my first marriage. He figured it out way too late. I moved on and am incredibly happy.
|Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
|He is a vampire, Sissy. Let him go find the sun! Let me know if everything is ok?
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|emotions stir in the pot,,soo confusing,,,Hope you are OK
|Reviewed by Charlie
|Most vampires feed off blood, but some feed off tears. BEWARE! --Charlie|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Nothing scares more that sensing our feeling wanting to burst and we don't know what to do about it.
Nice one, can relate.
|Reviewed by Ted Bossis
|Of sensitive souls to be cherished forever~love Ted|