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Wish
by Rose Loya

Wednesday, October 31, 2007
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(for a friend)

I wish you love
and hope
and healing

and light
and strength
my heart is reeling

from the decay
that keeps you kneeling
in your room

still, I am hopeful
that my good
intentions
do my beloved

good despite that
thing that you kneel to
inside your room

the good inside you's
clear to me
as crystal as your eyes,
like sea,
so I will pray
that on your knees
you just might see

while smoke is puffing
through the sound
of muffled wheezing
and heart's pound
the openness of truth
will hound
you in your ear

and you'll see love
and hope
and healing

and light
and strength
while love is kneeling

no more decay
will keep you reeling

in
your
room...

you're so much
more
than pipe's
smoke pour

inside your room...

copyright 2007 Rose Loya

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Reviewed by m j hollingshead 11/21/2007
i like this
Reviewed by Axilea MU 11/3/2007
I particularly like the way this poem sounds.
It begins with very simple words and then develops into something deeper, until the reader is ready to go back to your initial wish with more knowledge.
Effective piece of poetry.

Greetings,

Axilea
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 11/2/2007
very well done
sometimes just a word to know you are there and a prayer is all it takes
keep an eye but give space
enjoyed reading you :)
Reviewed by R Beeman 11/1/2007
well said Rose. I can relate to some of this and know first hand to keep on keeping on and enjoy life and try to keep the smoke out of your eyes. hope your friend understands.

always,
randy
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/31/2007
Sometimes when Friends or people close to us decide to shut down it is only a needed break to regroup and come out swinging at whatever life has to put forward...I hope this is the case for your freind Rose.

Fee
Reviewed by D Johnson 10/31/2007
A 'wish' for something that your friend/lover can only do themself.

Peace,
Dan
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