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|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|i like this|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|I particularly like the way this poem sounds.
It begins with very simple words and then develops into something deeper, until the reader is ready to go back to your initial wish with more knowledge.
Effective piece of poetry.
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|very well done
sometimes just a word to know you are there and a prayer is all it takes
keep an eye but give space
enjoyed reading you :)
|Reviewed by R Beeman
|well said Rose. I can relate to some of this and know first hand to keep on keeping on and enjoy life and try to keep the smoke out of your eyes. hope your friend understands.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Sometimes when Friends or people close to us decide to shut down it is only a needed break to regroup and come out swinging at whatever life has to put forward...I hope this is the case for your freind Rose.
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|A 'wish' for something that your friend/lover can only do themself.