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We all need to turn around and realize who stands before us.
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Turn me around and let me see your beautiful face standing before me. Turn me around and let me hear sweet love tones ringing in my ear. Turn me around and let me smell the essence of your presence, wickedly magical as cast by a wizard’s spell. Turn me around and let me taste your delicate flesh, not quickly devoured, no never in haste. Turn me around and let me feel the presence of your heat on me surreal. Turn me around and I will stay, just you and me together all day. Turn me around and hand me the phone, I’ll be sick today with you alone. I turned around at the sound of your robe falling to the floor. That seductive grin, that crooked finger beckoning me forward for a little more. I stand and listen as you say. Last night was just a tease, now I’ll have you my way. So turn and turn again. Spin my soul with heart spun gold. For I stand in awe at the angel I behold.
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
11/24/2007 |
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I feel your both movements!
Romantic "real" you!
I can so relate!
a writing fool, we seem to drool!
YOu rule!
Warm hugs and Warmer love, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/7/2007 |
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| pretty darn romantic- |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
11/7/2007 |
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I love how you got all the senses involved in "Turn Me Around." Yes, that is how love between two people should be.
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
11/7/2007 |
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| Seductive and sensuous. A symbolic dance by lovers. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
11/7/2007 |
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Beautiful, outstanding and very romantic
Thank You Randy
For the pleasure of reading this Romantic jewel
Peace & Love be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
11/7/2007 |
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| A romantic indeed, nice lines. Lovely write Randy. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
11/7/2007 |
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"Turn me around and I will stay, just you
and me together all day.
Turn me around and hand me the phone,
I’ll be sick today with you alone." I liked these lines alot. You write romantic poetry beautifully,Randy.
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