Say You Say Me
by Southern Comfort
Wednesday, November 07, 2007
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Baby, I looked in vain for someone to love and have them love me back, but now you have graced my life and made it brand new. For Lobo
Your voice washes over me, warming me like a cozy fire,
It is rich, low and manly and it heightens my desire.
Your image dances before my eyes, the face I adore,
I delight in your view, I wish nothing more.
I want to steal you away and hold you close to me,
To make the fantasy of you, my reality.
I wish to dwell in you and disappear into your soul,
To share your heartbeat, giving you my essence to have and hold.
Soon we shall be together and seal our destiny,
Then we will be as one, to say you and say me.
Music: Say You, Say Me
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|Reviewed by Silent Dream
|Beautifully expressed. I love these lines.. (I wish to dwell in you and disappear into your soul, /To share your heartbeat, giving you my essence to have and hold.)
((Hugs and LOve)) ~yourDreamyGal
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Very beautifully said!
Love the tenacity I feel within your lines SC!
Love and Warmly, Warrior Gypsy Lady Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Well said sista!!
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|A full heart have two united halves!!!!!!
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|So beautiful, it just soaks up the love and admiration between two so well. To love, give and share is a wonderful way to be....
|Reviewed by jude forese
|endearing and heartfelt ...|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|A real pretty poem SC
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Love is in the air. Your poem is breath-taking and gives my heart a wonderful feeling for you and he.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Sweet, tender and such a blessing to feel that kind of love and belonging.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|So tender and sweet, just beautiful SC.|
|Reviewed by stan nassano
|Such a sweet love offering SC,a moving write,to turn a fantasty
into reality and share the gift of love is a treasure to hold for ever,well done, love
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|"to say you and say me."
You done said it real well Sissy, as always.
P.S. Music didn't play