by Amber V Moonstone
Wednesday, November 14, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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To believe in the Spirit of Love!
by Amber "V" Moonstone 11/14/07
Tell me, you remember,
Tell me, you can't live without me.
Tell me, everything is going to work out.
I shall always remember,
I shall always not live without you.
I shall try to believe it will work out.
When the sun stops shining,
When the moon stops illuminating,
That is when my spirit will leave yours.
Never falter from this love,
always know we are blessed from above,
And, Always feel my spirit within your spirit!
Tell me, you remember,
Tell me, You can't live without me.
Tell me, everything is beautiful,
Tell me, The Sun will always shine,
Tell me, The Moon will always illuminate,
Tell me my spirit will always be within your spirit.
Can You Tell Me? I shall Tell You!
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|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Love this poem Amber -Viv-
I'll tell you, to never stop writing!
So much is said in these lines!
So much is felt between the lines!
every relationship needs and must go both ways...
I feel a sense of determination! filled with deep longing passion!
Warm hugs and love, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeooxoo
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|I mam going to tell you something Amber
this is one beautiful write
peace & love be with you
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|A very intense need to love and be loved, expressed so beautifully Amber.|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|A beautiful write of love, the expectation of love, and hope for continued love.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Beautiful write, Amber, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Questions that we all want answered when we love someone and yet the uncertainty of that love shadows our minds and hearts. Often it is because of past experience and it is only with time that a new love can prove the past is not the present. Lovely write Amber.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|And what...if I may ask, will you tell back?
Like a bee, from flower to flower, this poem takes drops of literary nectar to the aching soul.
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|The answer is already written in the wind...when you believe in the spirit of love. Such a beautiful piece filled with passion's intensity.
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|yes I like the way you wrote this a lot as well|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|L o v e l y. Love the clever way you have used repetition, and the passion with which you write. Thanks! 'Pea' <3|
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|It has to be a two-way street for it to work. And, of course someone has to be the first to make the pronouncement of love. If he doesn't get the picture and understand how much he's loved, well ...
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A beautiufl poem of yearning to hear what your heart feels returned to you...I'm sure he will tell you;-) Lovely work!
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|The heart pulls the words out and the plead is evident. Just beautiful in a pleading heart...within your words.
Love and blessings!