|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i enjoyed this write-|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Chuck Keller
|Great metaphor and the imagery is great.|
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|This is almost haunting in it's simplicity and beauty.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This is so lifelike that I can almost picture you there watching your desire with him perhaps looking at somthing outside the picture frame. I can almost see the tip of your tongue as it caresses those soft lips as if to taste what could be...this is beautiful Rebecca and so sensually delightful that I love it.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Gotta love it . . . A subtle (not!) declaration of feelings no longer supressed . . .|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|If the person you wrote this to isn't aware, bet he is now...well done, Rebecca!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.