AuthorsDen.com   Join (Free!) | Login  

     Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
   Services MarketPlace (Free to post!)
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Edie Batstone, iCULLEN DORN, iErnest Paquin, iArmineh Ohanian, iRhoberta Shaler, iDavid Snowdon, iLinda Alexander, i

  Home > Crime > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

· Become a Fan
· Contact me
· Sponsor Me!
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 3,370 Titles
· 56,990 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Dec, 2001

Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.


Popular Poetry (Crime)
  1.  Finalization
  2.  Two Poilice Officers Murdered
  3.  Holy war



Working Title: Weather Movin' In
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Wednesday, November 28, 2007
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Become a Fan

Recent poems by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
•  Past Due, 2014, Karla Dorman
•  So THERE, 2014, Karla Dorman
•  Hold On: Spring Is Coming, 2014, Karla Dorman
•  THEY, 2013, Karla Dorman
•  The Death of Autumn, 2013, Karla Dorman
           >> View all 3,280

--FICTION--

Hearing Garth Brooks' "The Thunder Rolls" inspired this.



His face, a fast moving storm front
overspreading the marriage
vows to love and to cherish.  Clouds
of fury consume all in
its path until nothing remains
but lightning, flashing and roar
of fist-sized hail beating her to
the ground.  Bitch, he says.  Your fault.
Shouldn't have pushed, couldn't leave well
enough alone, could you?  No.
Had to get up in my bidness.
Stop your cryin or I will
give you somethin to cry about.
Where's my dinner?  I'm hungry.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (11/28)
  

Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!


Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 11/29/2007
Powerful write, the graphic speaks volumes
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Charlie 11/29/2007
It's never too late to back out...
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 11/29/2007
The emotion within this piece is palpable...scary
peace and love, Carole~
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 11/29/2007
That one is like a Darth Vader without the mask!!!!!!!!
Scary thoughts, scary poem!
Georg
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 11/29/2007
Ok, I got my Garth Brooks songs mixed up. I thought thunder rolls was about a young boy learning about love from an older woman. See? I can be wrong.

Walt
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten 11/28/2007
Toss it out the window and pray for the sun to come out and burn his ass off! LOL!
Damn girl, you got it in ya...I wouldn't want to mess with the StormSpinner! :)
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Reviewed by Mary Coe 11/28/2007
Storms can be very bitter. Interesting write.
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 11/28/2007
Ftraky graphic. I don't follow Garth Brooks so this is totally strange for me. Is this about a song or about his marriage?
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 11/28/2007
Karla on the Storm...He looks like Lord Vordamor....
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 11/28/2007
I don't know, kinda gives me flashes of "Riders on the Storm," and oldie, but a goodie . . .
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/28/2007
Karla, your interpretation of storms and life just keeps on getting better and better! Dark, disturbing piece about the horrors of abuse; God help those people who live in that situation every day! Very well penned; brava! The pic fits tne nature of this perfectly!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(



Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.