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Working Title: Weather Movin' In
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, November 28, 2007
Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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--FICTION--

Hearing Garth Brooks' "The Thunder Rolls" inspired this.

His face, a fast moving storm front
overspreading the marriage
vows to love and to cherish. Clouds
of fury consume all in
its path until nothing remains
but lightning, flashing and roar
of fist-sized hail beating her to
the ground. Bitch, he says. Your fault.
Shouldn't have pushed, couldn't leave well
enough alone, could you? No.
Had to get up in my bidness.
Stop your cryin or I will
give you somethin to cry about.
Where's my dinner? I'm hungry.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (11/28)

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Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	11/29/2007

Powerful write, the graphic speaks volumes God Bless Michelle~




Reviewed by Charlie	11/29/2007

It's never too late to back out...




Reviewed by Carole Mathys	11/29/2007

The emotion within this piece is palpable...scary peace and love, Carole~




Reviewed by Georg Mateos	11/29/2007

That one is like a Darth Vader without the mask!!!!!!!! Scary thoughts, scary poem! Georg




Reviewed by Walt Hardester	11/29/2007

Ok, I got my Garth Brooks songs mixed up. I thought thunder rolls was about a young boy learning about love from an older woman. See? I can be wrong. Walt




Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten	11/28/2007

Toss it out the window and pray for the sun to come out and burn his ass off! LOL! Damn girl, you got it in ya...I wouldn't want to mess with the StormSpinner! :) Loved it! Love and Peace~ Kimmy~




Reviewed by Mary Coe	11/28/2007

Storms can be very bitter. Interesting write.




Reviewed by Susan de Vegter	11/28/2007

Ftraky graphic. I don't follow Garth Brooks so this is totally strange for me. Is this about a song or about his marriage? Love, Susan




Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	11/28/2007

Karla on the Storm...He looks like Lord Vordamor....




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)	11/28/2007

I don't know, kinda gives me flashes of "Riders on the Storm," and oldie, but a goodie . . .




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	11/28/2007

Karla, your interpretation of storms and life just keeps on getting better and better! Dark, disturbing piece about the horrors of abuse; God help those people who live in that situation every day! Very well penned; brava! The pic fits tne nature of this perfectly! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(




Reviewed by d. krusky	11/28/2007

Wow! I'm amazed at how you can interpret weather in all different emotional states of life. This was heavy almost dark, but like a looming storm, so it should be. Excellant work! The picture kinda scared me.....tee hee! Smiles, Dorothy

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